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On 21 of March 2008 about 10 o'clock took place assembly entitled: "Welcome Spring!".
That funny hour was organized by IIF. Expect pupils, at the gym arrived teachers and director. He started assembly short speech. Than IIF intervened to action. Firstly, three girls recited poems. They gave applouse. Bext, on the scene of Traugutt school performed boys. Iwan, Tom, Mark and Brian staged the well-know caberet: "Don't move and give me your money" which author are Ani mru mru. They were fighting, firing and riding a horse. Moreover they were telling jokes and funny stories. When people were laughing at boys, arrived new girls and they started to dance. All of them had got miniskirt and yellow blouses. Finally, all song together song suc a beautiful song "First day of our life" and assembly ended about 11 o'clock.
Performance was filled positive emotion. All the actors, singers and dancers were excellent. Especially caberet appealed to audience. "Great fun!"- told friend some boy. Decoration was very interesting too- three huge trees with coloured flowers.
In my opinion, the assembly's IIF was organized fortunate. They proved that each can do something useful for school.

Dlaczego NIKT was nie uczy gdzie nalezy pisac 'the'. Co to jest??

On 21ST of March 2008 AT about 10 o'clock took place AN assembly entitled:
"Welcome Spring!".
'Expect pupils' (co to niby jest?), at the gym arrived THE teachers and THE director.
He started assembly short speech....(prosze wg ang. gramatyki).
ThEn IIF intervened to action.
'They' (to znaczy kto? the girls?) gave 'applouse' (ortog). Next, on the scene of THE Traugutt school performed THE boys.
Iwan, Tom, Mark and Brian staged the well-know 'caberet' (ortog): "Don't move
and give me your money" OF which THEW authorS are Ani mru mru. They were
fighting, firing (ale co? guns?) and riding a horse.
When people were laughing at THE boys, 'arrived new girls' (zla kol slow) and they started to dance. All of them had got miniskirtS and yellow blouses. Finally, all 'song' SANG together 'song' (niepotr) sucH a beautiful song'
First day of our life" and THE assembly ended about 11 o'clock.
THE pPerformance was filled WITH positive emotion.
Especially THE 'caberet' (ortog) appealed to THE audience.
>"Great fun!"- told HIS friend 'some' A boy. THE decoration was very interesting
too- three huge trees with coloured flowers.
In my opinion, the assembly's IIF was 'organized fortunate' (zla kol slow - fortunate-jest zla czescia zdania). They proved that each can do something useful for THE school.

expect pupils- to miało znaczyć oprócz uczniów, (i potem) na sale gim. przybyli....

Wielkie dzieki za sprawdzenie!
Fakt, niby 'the' to normalka, a jednak ciągle o tym zapominam.

sprawdź w słowniku: expect i except

>took place AN assembly

an assembly entitled... took place on the 21st...

Terri, chyba tylko tak?