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Person in the picture is a girl. Her name is Basia and now she is about 20. She is singer and actress. She's medium height and quite well-build. Her hair is thin, straght, long and dark colour. She's got a side parting too. Face is oval shape. Her eyebrows are regular and slighty arched.
Unfortunately her eyelashes are thick but I like Basia's eyes. It is even big and is beatiful brown colour. Her nose and mouth look normal, and chin is round. She's got smooth skin. Basia special features is a smal mole under mouth.

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THE Person in the picture is a girl. Her name is Basia and now she is
>about 20. She is A singer and actress. She's medium height and quite
>well-builT. Her hair is thin, straght, long and dark [colour]. She's got
>a side parting too. HER Face HAS AN oval shape. Her eyebrows are regular and
>slighty arched.
>Unfortunately her eyelashes are thick but I like Basia's eyes. It [CHYBA THEY] is QUITE big and is beaUtiful brown colour. Her nose and mouth look normal,
>and HER chin is round. She's got smooth skin. Basia'S special feature is a
>smal mole under HER mouth.

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