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Temat: Komputery staja sie coraz bardziej popularne, ale eksperci twierdza iz powszechna komputeryzacja zburzy normalne stosunki miedzyludzkie. Napisz rozprawke , podajac argumenty za i przeciw tej tezie oraz wlasna opinie na ten temat.

Computers are very popular in 21 st. century. People think that they can do everything using them. However, in scientist opinion computers spoils interpersonal relations.
Have their righ or meybe they are in huge error?
I would like to percive that computers are very practical. They make life much easier. We can do our work very quiqly so they help to save time by doing some things instead of us.
We can talk with people on gg, e-mail, skype etc.
Computers are very usefull equipments, because they allow us to be in touch with family, friends and other people who are far of us.
We can also on the Internet find a job, some important informations, news, listen to music, watch films etc.
Unfortunately computers have got lots of disadventages.
First, when we sit in front of computer for a long time probably we have sore eyes and we need to wear glasses, we allowed have a problem with backbone and mass our body which can grow up.
The largest disadventage of computers is that they ruin relationships, couse when we sit in front of computers for a long time we are becoming lazy, in closed (zamknieci w sobie?). We not have got willingness on meeting with friends or family. Our vocabulary are becoming very poor and we can not speak out. It cause that we can not find a job, build attachment with close persons.
In conclusion scientis have a right, so we should use a computer without head, then it can really demage interpersonal relations. We should use a computer in a clever way that it will not ruin ours private life, but it will help us in our routin life and save ours time, which we could spend with friends and family.
Computers are very popular in THE 21st century.
However, in 'scientist opinion' (tu cos jest zle, in the opinion of the scientists) computers 'spoils' SPOIL interpersonal relations.
'Have' ARE 'their' THEY righT or 'meybe' (ortog) they are in A huge error?
I would like to 'percive' (ortog) that computers are very practical.
We can do our work very 'quiqly' (ortog) so they help to save time by doing some things instead of us (doing them).
We can talk with people on gg, e-mail, skype 'etc' (jak mozesz rozmawiac z ludzmi na 'etc'?).
Computers are very 'usefull' (ortog) equipments, because they allow us to be in
touch with family, friends and other people who are far 'of' AWAY FROM us.
'We can also on the Internet find a job',(zrob to inaczej...On the internet....) some important 'informations' (to niepol.), news, listen to music, watch films 'etc' (co masz z tym 'etc'?)
Unfortunately computers have got lots of 'disadventages' (ortog).
First, when we sit in front of A computer for a long time probably we
have sore eyes and we need to wear glasses, we 'allowed' (zle slowo) MAY have a problem with backbone and 'mass our body which can grow up' (tego nie rozumiem).
The largest 'disadventage' (ortog) of computers is that they ruin relationships,
'couse' (nowa wersja mojego ulubionegio slowa BECAUSE) when we sit in front of computers for a long time we are becoming lazy, 'in closed' (zle - znajdz cos innego)
'We not have got' (nie - WE DO NOT HAVE THE willingness TO GO on A meeting with friends or family. Our vocabulary 'are' (ale vocabulary to l. poj - dlaczego 'are') becoming very poor and we can not speak out. 'It causeS' (napisz inaczej...This may have the effect of nhot being able to...) that we can not find a job, build attachment with 'close persons' (inaczej...persons close to us).
In conclusion scientisTS 'have' (zle slowo) 'a' (niepotr) right, 'so' (to jest zle slowo tutaj i zmienia zdanie na calkowicie cos innego od tego co chciales powiedziec) we should use a computer 'without head' (prosto z translatora - ale niestety zle), then it can really 'demage' (ortog) interpersonal relationsHIPS. We should use a computer in a clever way that it will not ruin 'ours' OUR private life, but it will help us in our routinE life and save 'ours' OUR time, which we could spend with friends and family.

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