Bardzo Proszę Kogoś O Pomoc :)

Witam :), mam do napisania prace "sea or mountains? where do you prefer spending holidays?" Napisałam to tak ale myślę że jakieś błędy będą np w słówkach lub czasie. Bardzo proszę o pomoc :)

I WOULD LIKE SPEND THEIR HOLIDAYS IN THE MOUNTAINS. MOUNTAINS ARE A GREAT PALCE FOR WINTER SPORTS, RESTED AND GOOD FUN.
PEOPLE WHO LOVE SPENDING TIME ON THE SKI SLOPES WILL CHOOSE MOUNTAINS. WHENEVER I'M IN THE MOUNTAINS NOT WASTED A SINGLE DAY BY JUST SITTING AT HOME WILLING TO SPEND ON SKIING, SKATTING, SNOWBOARDING AND OTHER WINTER SPORTS. I OFTEN TYRING NEW SPORTS, THIS ISN'T ALWAYS SO SIMPLE TO EXECUTE AND I DON'T ALWAYS SUCCEED, BUT ANYONE CAN TRY, RIGHT?
IN MOUNTAINS NO JUST SNOW IS A ENTERTAINMENT. THERE ARE ALSO CLUBS THAT TAKE PLACE IN THE EVENINGS EVENTS, RESTAURANTS WITH LOCAL FOOD, GYMS, AMYSEMENT PARKS, SWIMMING POOLS, SPA AND MAMY OTHER DEALS. I WILL NEVER FILLING BORING THERE. I TAKE MY COUSINS TO SHOP. WE BUY NOT ONLY CLOTHES BUT ALSO COSMETICS AND JEWERLY.
MOUNRANEERS- THERE ARE VERY FRIENDLY PEOPLE AHO WILL NEVER REFULSE TO HELP YOU WHEN YOU NEED IT. THEY HAVE A GREAT SEBCE OF HUMOR AND A GOOD INTERVIEW WITH THEM. I THINK THAT POLAND ISN'S SO NICE AS THE PEOPLE OF THE MOUNTAINS. I LOVE WHEN THE EVENINGS MEETING IS FUN. THEIR HABITS ARE WONDERFUL, SUCH PRACTICES DON'T HAVE THE SEA.
I THINK I WILL NOT IN THE MOUNTAINS TURNED ON HOLIDAYS AT THE SEASIDE. AS FOR ME IT'S BETTER PLACE FOR RELAX, MEETINGS WITH COOL PEOPLE, MY FAMILY. I HAVE OTHER REASONS FOR EXAMPLE: TERMAL LAKE THAT CAN REPLACE SEA, AND I CAN (OPALIĆ SIĘ) ON TJE SLOPES.

Bardzo prosze o odp :)

I would like TO spend MY holidays...
The mountains are a great PLACE
...winter sports, A GREAT REST and good fun
...whenever i'm in the mountains I DON'T WASTE a single...
...at home. I'm eager to spend TIME ON SKIING...
I often TRY new sports, IT'S NOT ALWAYS THAT SIMPLE TO DO
AND SOMETIMES I FAIL BUT YOU WON'T WIN IF YOU DON'T TRY, RIGHT?

IN THE MOUNTAINS NOT ONLY SNOW IS AN ENTERTAINMENT.
...CLUBS THAT THAKE PLACE IN... (nie bardzo wiem o co tu chodzi)
...AMUSEMENT...
...SPAS...
...and MANY MORE ATTRACTIONS WHERE YOU'LL NEVER FEEL BORED.
AFTER A TIRING BUT SATISFYING DAY, I REALLY ENJOY SHOPPING IN LOCAL SHOPS WITH MY COUSINS, WE BUY CLOTHES, COSMETICS AND JEWELLERY AND HAVE GREAT FUN.

HIGHLANDERS ARE VERY friendly...refuse ANY HELP when...
...SENCE OF HUMOUR AND IT'S NICE TO CHAT WITH THEM.
I THINK THERE ARE NO NICER PEOPLE ANYWHERE ELSE IN POLAND.
I LOVE MEETING AND TALKING WITH THEM IN THE EVENINGS.
THEIR CUSTOMS ARE WONDERFUL, YOU WON'T FIND ANYTHING LIKE THIS AT THE SEASIDE.
I'D EVEN SAY THAT THERMAL LAKES CAN EASILY REPLACE THE SEA, IT'S ALSO NOT DIFFICULT TO GET A TAN ON THE SLOPES.
I THINK I WILL ALWAYS CHOOSE THE MOUNTAINS AS MY HOLIDAY DESTINATION RATHER THAN ANY OTHER PLACE.
I CAN HAVE A GOOD REST THERE AND MEET INTERESTING PEOPLE.
I WILL ALWAYS COME BACK THERE.