proszę o sprawdzenie.

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Bardzo proszę o sprawdzenie pracy:) Nie jest to cały tekst, więc może wydawać się trochę chaotyczna. Z góry dziękuję komuś, kto poświęci czas na sprawdzenie tego. I przepraszam za wszelkie błędy ale angielskiego uczę się od niedawna.

People most often eat the unhealthy food and they don’t care for their body.
How is it possible to change it? (w sensie-jak można to zmienić?)
That people will get to like the food fruits, vegetables, salads.
what's this? It is health food, of course, but isn't popular in the world.
Unfortunately there are many instances to it.
People know about the health food, but they more often choose the junk food .
Why is this happening?
First of all people more and more eat to the McDonald’s restorations, Wendy's etc.
In the past there weren’t many restorations.

In the USA there are many restaurants with the junk food.
The bars attract people attention.

In the past, restaurants aren’t too attractive and so good.
However a directors keep up with the times and they corrects the economy. They set up a new bars.

The family restaurants serve a lot of various dishes.
However do people consider advantages and disadvantages this food?

There are only seven products don’t contain the sugar in McDonald’s!
And the salad contains so much calories as a meat dishes.
It isn't okay! And isn't healthy!

Nonetheless people eat in this bar of their own free will.
Many people surf the net and watch the TV. Media often complain the junk food. There are a lot of advertisements. McDonald’s spends much money to advertisements. And the firms with healthy food spend to little money!
there aren’t advertisements about the health food.
The film is criticizes such facts
People have access to the net than it used to have.

People lead unhealthy lifestyle than before. They are too busy and they don’t many time. They spend a little time in home and eat in the bars. In the worlds there are also many singers and they don’t have to cook for one person.
People most often eat the unhealthy food and they don't care for their
body. (z tego wynika, ze 'eating unhealthy food' niema nic wspolnego z tym, ze 'don't care for their body'- show CONNECTION.
How is it possible to change 'it' (ale co chcesz zmienioc, 'stop eating' czy 'looking after their body')
..That people will get to like the food fruits, vegetables, salads....(to zdanie nie jest gram.)
What's this? It is health food, of course, but IT isn't popular in the
world.
Unfortunately, there are many instances 'to' OF it.
People know about the 'health food' (tutaj musisz byc bardziej dokladniejszy, pojecie 'health food' to jedzenie ktore sie kupuje w 'health food shops, to jest inne pojecie od 'healthy food' znaczy vegetables, fruits itp), but they more often THAN NOT choose 'the' (niepotr) junk food .
...First of all people more and more eat to the McDonald's restorations,
Wendy's etc.....(to nie jest gram zdanie. I do tego, jak mozna jest w 'etc'-co to takiego jest)
In the past there weren't many 'restorations' (to jest calkowicie zle slowo-restoration znaczy cos innego).
In the USA there are many restaurants 'with' (chyba masz na mysli SELLING the junk food.
The bars attract people'S attention.
In the past, restaurants 'aren't' (prosze nie uzywac tego dziwolaga, i to do tego zle!) WERE NOT too attractive and 'so' (tutaj masz na mysli NOT AS good.
However 'a' (niepotr) THE directors WANT TO keep up with the times and they 'corrects' 'CORRECT the economy' (nie rozumiem tego pojecia). They set up 'a' (niepotr- nie dajemy przed l.mn) new bars.
However do people consider THE advantages and disadvantages OF this food?
There are only seven products THAT don't contain 'the' (niepotr) sugar in McDonald's! (Np. jakie-dowody)
And the salad contains 'so much' (zle pojecie AS MANY calories as a meat 'dishes' (albo 'as a meat dish' albo 'as meat dishes' (prosze nauczyc sie rozruzniac l.poj i l.mn), .
And IT isn't healthy!
Nonetheless people eat in this 'bar' (jak tu masz na mysli McDo - to lepiej 'fast-food outlet') of their own free will.
THE media often complain ABOUT 'the' (niepotr) junk food.
McDonald's spends much money 'to' ON advertisements. And the firms with healthy food spend toO little money!
There 'aren't' (dlaczego myslisz, ze to aren't sluzy do wszystkiego!) ARE NOT ANY advertisements about 'the' (niepotr) health food.
The film 'is' (niepotr) criticizes such facts. People have access to the net MORE than 'it' (ale przeciez tutaj odnosisz sie do 'people' dlaczego czas.l. poj?) used to have.
MORE people lead AN unhealthy lifestyle than before. They are too busy and
they don't HAVE 'many' MUCH time. They spend 'a' TOO little time in home and eat in the 'bars' (napisz fast-food outlets).
In the 'worlds' (a ile tych swiatow mamy?) there are also many singers and they don't have to cook for one person.