Opowiadanie- proszę o sprawdzenie jak najszybciej

Bardzo mi zależy, żeby to ktoś sprawdził jak najszybciej i ocenił mniej więcej na jakim poziomie to jest napisane;)
Będę bardzo wdzięczna;)

The worst job interview I've ever had.

It was a sunny day, I was in a good mood, altough I had in that day very important job interview. I was little nervous, but I had small hope I would got this job. I would have worked as a secretary. I was unemployed for a half a year and it was a big chance for me. I had got dressed in my best formal clothes, took my CV and went to the office.
When I came there, I saw the atposphere was unfriendly and strangely enough. I went to director's room and I had to wait for him. When he came I went with him. He seemed kind and reliable, but a bit cynic too. We started talking, he asked me where I had working recently and why I wanted get this job.
After that, he ask me to get my CV and other documents. When I took it out from my purse, it was terrible...All of them were smudgy, something had to spilled in my bag. I was so ashamed, I didn't know what could I did then. Mr Smith was laughing for a minute, but after that he started shout to me and didin't let explain anything.
I took everything and I broke out from his office. I was crying for all the way to home. I have never forget this situation. Fortunately, after two weeks I found work in other company with very helpful and nice people.

Mam jeszcze jedno do sprawdzenia, gdyby ktoś chciał pomóc;)

Unwelcome visitor

It was wet, spring evening. I came back at home very upset and irritated.I was really under the weather. I didn't want see anybody. What is more, my lovely, little doggy Filly have lost.
Suddenly, someone was started knock. I looked, who was there: "Oh, great, Tom" -I though. I didn't like this classmate, he was so confident and conceited. I rarely had talking with him earlier and now he was in my house! Why?! "Hi, Could you borrow me your English notebook?"- he said, when I opened the door. "If I have to.."-I whispered. I invited him to my room and started look for the notebook. At first, I wasn't pleasant for him, but, what strange, he was very nice. Tom was talking about his hobbies and he interested me in it.
I convinced he wasn't so selfish and irritated how he seemed earlier. I spent with him two hours and then he had to go. I said: "Goodbye" and went to the bed.
However, five minutes later, someone started knock. It was Tom. I opened the door, didn't understand, why he came back. "I would forgotten... I have suprise for you, I found your dog.." I was really suprised. I couldn't say any word. Tom changed my mood his visit and thereto he founded my Filly.
It was the most unwelcome visitor I've ever had. I had got a new friend, who can come to me, when he want now and wasn't unlike person no more.

It was a sunny day, I was in a good mood, 'altough' ortog) I had 'in' ON that day A very important job interview. I was A little nervous, but I had small
hope I would 'got' GET this job. I would 'have worked' WORK as a secretary. I 'was' HAVE BEEN unemployed for 'a' (niepotr) half a year and it was a big chance for me.
When I came there, I saw the 'atposphere' (ortog) was unfriendly and 'strangely
enough' (nie rozumiem tego). I went to THE director's room and I had to wait for him.
He seemed kind and reliable, but a bit 'cynic' CYNICAL too. We started talking, he asked me where I had BEEN working recently and why I wanted TO get this job.
After that, he askED me to get my CV and other documents.
...something had 'to' (niepotr) spilled in my bag. I was so ashamed, I didn't know what 'could I' (zla kol I could) 'did' DO then. Mr Smith was laughing for a minute, but after that he started TO shout to me and 'didin't' (ortog) let ME explain anything.
I was crying 'for' Niepotr) all the way 'to' (niepotr) home. I 'have' WILL never forget this situation.

It was A wet, spring evening. I came back 'at' (niepotr) home very upset and
irritated.
I didn't want TO see anybody. What is more, my lovely, little doggy Filly 'have' GOT lost. Suddenly, someone 'was' (niepotr) started TO knock. I looked, (to see) who was there: "Oh, great, Tom" -I though.
I rarely had 'talking' TALKED with him earlier and now he was in my house! Could you 'borrow' (zle slowo - tutaj LEND me your English notebook?"- he said, when I opened the door.
I invited him to my room and started TO look for the notebook.
At first, I wasn't pleasant 'for' TO him, but, what WAS strange, he was very
nice. Tom was talking about his hobbies and he interested me in 'it' THEM - dlatego, ze hobbies to l. mn).
I WAS convinced THAT he wasn't so selfish and irritatABLE AS HE 'how he' (niepotr) seemed earlier.
I spent 'with him' (nie w tym miejscu) two hours WITH HIM and then he had to go. I said: "Goodbye" and went to 'the' (niepotr) bed.
However, five minutes later, someone started TO knock.
I opened the door, AND 'didn't' COULDN'T understand, why he came back. "I would
HAVE forgotten... I have A suprise for you,
I couldnh't say 'any' A word. Tom changed my mood BY his visit and 'there to he' THEN HE 'founded' (nie, to jest czas. nieregu. FOUND my Filly.
'It' HE was the most 'unwelcome visitor' (no, nie wiem, chyba 'welcome') I've ever had.(Jabym to zmienila...He was the most unwelcome visitor I ever had, but he turned out to be the most welcome)
I had got a new friend, who can come to me, when he wantS now and HE 'wasn't' ISN'T AN unlikeABLE person 'no' ANY more.

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