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I found myself in desert island. I not remembers. I was very hungry so I decided to go to the jungle and try to find something to eat. There were a lot of strange trees. Bananas grow on them. I found the food so I was very happy. On the morning catch fish for breakfast. After breakfast I build house on tree. I get along very well in the island but I pine for family and friends
I found myself 'in' ON A desert island.
...I not remembers....(To nie jest zdanie) (Cos nie wierze, ze z tym zdaniem masz trudnosci, a nastepne zdanie, chcociaz jest wiecej trudniejsze piszesz bezblednie)
Bananas 'grow' GREW on them.
'On' IN the morning (ale kto? treba napisac) 'catch' (mysle, ze czas przeszly) fish for breakfast.
After breakfast I builT A house on A tree. I 'get' GOT along very well 'in' ON the island, but I pineD for MY family and friends.
dzieki za to jak równiez za ten esej dostałem za nigo 5