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The black diamond
There was once a rich woman name Margarette, who lived alone in a beautiful, big house on the outskirts. She looked down on everybody and has never helped other people.
Mergarette was really pretty and she used to dress in fashionable clothes and she has never taken off a lovely chain with a precious black diamond. All inhabitants have known about it and thought whe woman as an eccentric.
Near by woman's house has lived John, who was hot-tempered and often nervous person. He was a mysterious man. John felt in love with Margarette at first sight.
The woman was unapproachable though he has sent a bunch of flowers everyday to her. Margarrete dreamt about truly love deep down in her soul and she liked John, but she did not show it for one a year. She was too proud.
Someday, she did not get flowers and she said to herself: "Oh, it is strange he did not give me any flowers... Even he didn't phone..."
Meanwhile, John in that day did not go to work and his behaviour was really strange, he was anxious all the day. His sister Anna did not know why..He went out in evening and he said only these words :"I'll be back in a moment.."
He would have never come...
In the next day, Anna heard on TV, that someone had killed the rich woman Margarrete, had stolen her precious black diamond, and an offender had escaped.
Anna knew who had done it. Someday, her brother told to her: " I saw Margarrete with other man, if he does not love me she will not love anybody..." But he was laughing then and she though he was joking..
The police would never catched him. And he still do not know if he loved Margarette or her black diamond more. Thanks to that diamond he is rich now...but unhappy still.

There was once a rich woman nameD Margarette, who lived alone in a
beautiful, big house on the outskirts (of the city). She looked down on everybody and haD never helped other people.
'Mergarette' (nie zmieniaj Mar-na Mer) was really pretty and she used to dress in fashionable clothes. She 'has' (niepotr) never 'taken' TOOK off a lovely chain with a precious black diamond. All inhabitants 'have known' KNEW about it and thought 'whe' (ortog) OF THE woman as an eccentric.
Near by THE woman's house 'has' (niepotr) lived John, who was hot-tempered and often A nervous person.
John 'felt' FELL in love with Margarette at first sight.
The woman was unapproachable though he 'has' (niepotr) sent a bunch of flowers
everyday to her. Margarrete dreamt about 'truly' TRUE love deep down in her
soul and she liked John, but she did not show it for one 'a' (co to 'a' tutaj robi?) year.
'Someday' ONE DAY, she did not get THE flowers and she said to herself: "Oh, it is strange THAT he did not give me any flowers... 'Even he' (zla kol slow He didn't even) didn't phone..."
Meanwhile, John 'in' ON that day did not go to work and his behaviour was
really strange, he was anxious all 'the' (niepotr) day.
He went out in THE evening and he said only these FEW words :"I'll
be back in a moment.."
...He would have never come... (inaczej. He would never come back)
'In' (niepotr) The next day, Anna heard on THE TV, that someone had killed the rich woman Margarrete AND had stolen her precious black diamond and THAT THE 'an' (niepotr) offender had escaped.
'Someday' ONE DAY, her brother told 'to' (niepotr) her: " I saw Margarrete with ANother man, if he does not love me she will not love anybody..."
The police would never 'catched' CATCH (to czas. niereg) him. And he still doES not know if he loved Margarette or her black diamond more. Thanks to that diamond he is rich now...but 'unhappy still' (still unhappy).

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