music festival - proszę o sprawdzenie i pomoc :)

Very popular in Poland is music festival in Opole. Opole is in the south-west of Poland. The festival takes every year usually in june and he lasts three days. To the festival come from about 10.000 people all over the Poland.
Biorą w nim udział największe polskie gwiazdy telewizyjne i filmowe. Popularni aktorzy i aktorki zaśpiewają najlepsze przeboje. There are also comedy shows, plays.

10 zdań do sprawdzenia o festiwalu w Opolu, bardzo was proszę.

1 Very popular in Poland is music festival in Opole.
2 Opole is in the south-west of Poland.
3 The festival takes every year usually in june and he lasts three days.
4 To the festival come from about 10.000 ? people all over the Poland.
5 More than 4 mln people can watch bands and singers on TV/ to wspaniale widowisko jak będzie?
6 .umiem tylko tak --->Stars on TV and great singers perform on an emorous takes place.
7 Popularni aktorzy i aktorki śpiewają najlepsze przeboje.- Popular actors are singing the best songs?
8. But there isn't only music - there are also comedy shows, plays.
9. There are three stages.
10. Festiwal Opole składa się z: premier, debiutów, kabaretonu i recitali.


proszę o pomoc

1 'Very popular in Poland is music festival in Opole' (napisz to inaczej... The music festival in Opole is...).
3 The festival takes every year usually in 'june' (miesiace dajemy duza litera) and 'he' (nie, festival to IT) lasts three days.
4 To the festival come from about 10.000 ? people all over the Poland. (napisz to inaczej...About 10,000 from all over Poland...)
5 More than 4 mln people can watch bands and singers on THEIR TV PERFORM (in this wonderful/fantastic spectacle)
6 .Stars on TV and great singers perform on an emorous 'takes place' (tego nie rozumiem - co chcesz powiedziec).
7 Popular actors 'are singing' SING the best songs?
8. But there isn't only music (at the festival) - there are also comedy shows, plays.
10. Festiwal Opole 'składa się' (consists of:) 'premier, debiutów, kabaretonu i
recitali' (poszukaj w slowniku).

The music festival in Opole is very popular.
Opole is in the south-west of Poland.
The festival takes every year usually in June and it lasts three days.
About 10,000 from all over Poland come to the festiwal.
More than 4 mln people can watch bands and singers on their perform.
6. Gwiazdy telewizyjne występują na ogromnej scenie.. coś takiego.
Popular actors sing the best songs.
But there isn't only music at the festival - there are also comedy shows, plays.
There are three stages.
Festiwal Opole consists of: premiers ,debuts,cabarets and recitales.
This is fantastic spectacle.


lepiej?

The festival takes PLACE every year usually in June and it lasts FOR three
days.
About 10,000 PEOPLE from all over Poland come to the 'festiwal' (ortog).
More than 4 mln people can watch bands and singers 'on their perform' (nie, PERFORM THEIR SONGS) .
'Festiwal' (ortog) Opole consists of: premiers ,debuts,cabarets and 'recitales' RECITALS.
This is A fantastic spectacle.
Teraz lepiej.

thank you :*

a to zdanie mozę jakos zmienić..
More than 4 mln people can watch bands and singers on their perform.

More than 4 mln people watch bands and singers on their perform on TV.?

More than 4 mln people watch bands and singers on TV.

dobrze?