Proszę o sprawdzenie, moje plany na przyszłość :]

Almost everybody dream about future, so do I. Planning future give us mobilization and power to do this what we plan. I would like to have fantastic family, big house, good job and comfortable car.
I choose reclamation for studying because my dream is to wrok in police. I would likte to be a policeman because acording me it is vert satisified job. I know of course that it is not easy to get to police, but I am going to do everything to make my dream comes true. In the future I want to live in big city. It could be Poznań, Bydgoszcz or Toruń. In this cities life is more attractive. There is more cinemas, parks, museums and a lot of different attractions. Moreover, I think working in police in big city is more interesting. Maybe policeman doesn`t earn much money at the begining, but they are respected by society. After few years of service in police I think I could build own house and travel around the world which is my another dream. When I will be retired, I am going to open computer service. I work with computers almost everyday and it is very enjoying for me. I am planning with my girlfriend to get married when she finifshed studying. I think it wil be 2014, we want to get married in July because we both were borned in this month. We want to have two kids, boy and girl. If I will have son, I want practise with him playing tennis, and maybe someday he became a famous tennis player.
I`m sure if I will work hard and I will be optimistic in thinking I can make my dreams come true, and together with my girlfriend we can be lovely family, have smart kids and wonderful life with no problems.

Almost everybody dreams about the future, so do I. Planning for the future gives us motivation and power to get done everything that we planed. I would like to have a wonderful family, big house, great job and comfortable car.I chose to study criminal justice becouse I always dreamed to work in the police . I would love to be a policeman, because in my oppinion , it is a very satisfying job. I know exactly , that it is not easy to get to the police today, but even though I will still try to do anything i can to make my dream come true(to reach my goal). In my future life I would like to live in the big city, it could be Poznan , Bydgoszcz or Torun. I think , that those cities are more attractive. There are more cinemas, parks, museums and a lot of different things to do. Moreover, working as a policeman in the big city can be much more interesting, than living in a small town. Aldough policemen doesn't earn a lot of money ,espetially at the beginning, but they are respected by society.
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>Almost everybody dream (co się dodaje w 3. osobie?) about THEIR future and so do I.
Planning OUR future give us MOTIVATES US AND EMPOWERS US to do what we plan.

I would like to have A fantastic family, big house, good job and comfortable car.

>I choose reclamation (a co to?) for studying because my dream is to wrok in
>police.

I would likte to be a policeman because I BELIEVE THAT (wg mnie po ang. to "in my opinion" albo "I think" albo "I believe", nigdy "according to me") it is A VERY SATISFYING job.

I know of course that it is not easy to BECOME A POLICEMAN,
>but I am going to do everything IN MY POWER to make my dream COME true.

In the
>future I want to live in A big city.

In THESE (l. mnoga) cities life is more attractive. There ARE more cinemas,
>parks, museums and a lot of different attractions.

Maybe POLICEMEN
>DO NOT earn much money at the beginning, but they are respected by
>society.

After few years of service in police I think I could build MY
>own house and travel around the world which is my OTHER dream (albo which is another dream of mine).

When (po when używamy czasu teraźniejszego do wyrażenia przyszłości)
>I will be retired, I am going to open computer service.
When I retire, I am going...

I work with
>computers almost everyday and it is very enjoying for me (albo: and I find it very enjoyable)

I am
>planning with my girlfriend to get married when she finifshed
>studying.
I am planning to marry my girlfriend when she finishes her studies.

I think it will be 2014. We want to get married in July
>because we both were BORN in this month.

We want to have two kids, A boy and A girl.

If (po if, tak samo jak po when - czas teraźniejszy) I HAVE A son, I want TO (po want czasownik z "to") practise with him playing
>tennis, and maybe someday he WILL BECOME a famous tennis player.

>I`m sure if I work hard and I AM optimistic in thinking, I
>can make my dreams come true, and together with my girlfriend we can
>be A lovely family, have smart kids and wonderful life with no problems.

Ładnie piszesz :)

I also think I could build my own house after working so many years in the service and travel around the world, which is my another dream. After Being retired I am going to open my own computer service, becouse i work on the computer almost everyday. It is very enjoyable.
Another thing I planned of doing I want to get married with my girlfriend, after she finnishes her studying . We thought of July 2014 at the beginning. This seemed a perfect time for us get married , because we were both born in this month. We also plan to have two kids, boy and a girl if possible. But if I will have a son, i will try to practice playing tennis with him, so maybe someday he could become famous tennis player.
I'm sure, that if I will stay focused on my work and be optimistic i can make it happen and together we can( make) a lovely family, have smart kids and all together live with less problems.

I also think I could build my own house after working so many years in the service and travel around the world, which is my another dream. After Being retired I am going to open my own computer service, becouse i work on the computer almost everyday. It is very enjoyable.
Another thing I planned of doing I want to get married with my girlfriend, after she finnishes her studying . We thought of July 2014 at the beginning. This seemed a perfect time for us get married , because we were both born in this month. We also plan to have two kids, boy and a girl if possible. But if I will have a son, i will try to practice playing tennis with him, so maybe someday he could become famous tennis player.
I'm sure, that if I will stay focused on my work and be optimistic i can make it happen and together we can( make) a lovely family, have smart kids and all together live with less problems.

jeszcze jedno jak przeczytasz, rozwaz wszelkie powyzsze podpowiedzi, musisz pewnie conieco poprawic. Dwa razy wypostowalam druga czesc. Ja tez sie ucze w Usa wiec moga byc jakies tam bledziki

Spasiba wszystkim xD

Do 'eva74' w jakim sensie ładnie piszę? :] A reclamation miało oznaczać resocjalizację.

Poprawnie :) Dobrze się czyta. Z jednej myśli gładko przechodzisz w następną.

W tych zdania tiny jest dużo błędów, tak że uważaj zanim to przepiszesz.

After few years of service in police I think I could build MY
>own house and travel around the world which is my OTHER dream (albo which is another dream of mine).

After A few years of ...

Jeszcze jedna praca do sprawdzenia, jeśli można prosić :]


I`m thinking about my future almost everyday. I like dreaming about my future life, about my future job and about my family, and I`m sure if I will work hard and study well I can have amazing life.
I`m conscious that it won`t be easy to find good job with high salary, so I decided to open an own small bussines. My dream is to open an animals shop. I just love animals, and I can`t imagine life without them. I like spending time with my dog Pluto, with my four chumsters and three snakes. Moreover I visit ZOO almost every weekend if it is possible. I`m not sure is it great idea to open that bussines, but I will do what I really like and what I love since I remember. My girlfriend likes animals also, but no much as I. Together it will be easier to open that shop. After few years we will build big house on the country side, and maybe we open small 'agroturystyka' ( nie mogłem nigdzie tego znaleźć xD). We both study different subjects, but when we finished, we are going to study biology at University. In the nearest future we would like to go abroad to some exotic country as volunteers for two or three years. In my opinion it is the best way to earn money that we need to open shop.
I want to be a god father for my kids, lovely husband for my wife, respected and demanding but not strict boss for workers in my shop. I want to study as long as possible, because I know that without knowledge I can`t be good in my job and in my hobby. Today we have financial crisis, it is not good to open new bussines while other shops are closing, so I aware that maybe we will have to stay abroad and we will try to live there. It wont be easy, because I love my country and my city, but I will do everything to make my dreams come true even abroad. After twenty or thirty years I will come back, and I will narrate my grandchildren how looks life and culture in exotic country, but I would rather don`t leave our beautiful mountains, forests and sea. I want work here where I was born, because I`m a patriot just like my father, grandfather and rest of family.

...., and I`m sure if
>I will work hard and study well I can have amazing life.

Hej! Pisałam wyżej, że po if/when używa się czasu teraźniejszego do wyrażenia przyszłości!

...if I work hard......I can have AN amazing life.


>I`m conscious (złe słowo)that it won`t be easy to find good job with high salary,so I decided to open an own small bussines.
I REALIZE......to START MY own small business.

I`m not sure is it great idea to open that bussines,but I
>will do what I really like and what I love since I remember.
I'm not sure IF IT IS A great idea.....but I want to do what I really like and love ever since I can remember.

My
>girlfriend likes animals also, but no much as I.
....no AS much as I DO.


After few years we will build big house on
>the country side, and maybe we open small 'agroturystyka' ( nie mogłem
>nigdzie tego znaleźć xD).
After A few years, we will build a big house in the countryside, and maybe we will open a small agrotourism business.


We both study different subjects, but when
>we finished, we are going to study biology at University.
Currently, we are studying different subjects, but when we finish, we are...


>I want to be a god father for my kids, lovely husband for my wife,
>respected and demanding but not strict boss for workers in my shop.
....to be a good father.....a great husban...and a respected....

I
>want to study as long as possible, because I know that without
>knowledge I can`t be good in my job and in my hobby.
...at my job and my hobby.

Today we have
>financial crisis, it is not good to open new bussines while other
>shops are closing, so I aware that maybe we will have to stay abroad
>and we will try to live there.
....we are experiencing a financial crisis, so it is not good....a new business....closing. I am aware that we might have to stay abroad and try to live there.


After twenty or thirty years I will come back, and I
>will narrate my grandchildren how looks life and culture in exotic
>country, but I would rather don`t leave our beautiful mountains,
>forests and sea.
...and I will tell my grandchildren about life and culture in an exotic country, but I would rather NOT leave....


I want work here where I was born, because I`m a
>patriot just like my father, grandfather and rest of family.

...and the rest of family.

the rest of MY family.