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Bardzo proszę o pomoc! Czy ktoś mógł by mi sprawdzić czy ten tekst jest dobrze napisany??;) Bardzo mi zależy! Proszę i z góry dziękuje:))

I think that song „ we are the champions” could be a lead song in life. This song is metaphor of life of each person. Each preson in life survive ups and downs.
This song is about person, who committed in his life a few bad mistakes , but paid his dues and had come through and later attained the succes.
Song gives us for apprehension that life is hard and have a lot of barriers. But we one must never give up . Each person have in life problems, but one must never lose hope that will be better and ours problems will be solutions. We must be a strong ana fight till the end. It is necessary always assiduously pursue, order to become a champion!!

;))!

Bardzo Was proszę o pomoc!:)) niech ktoś mi to sprawdzi;( pomóżcie!;(

Bardzoo proszę o pomoc!;) bardzo mi zależy ;(!

I think that THE song "We are the champions" could be a leadING song in
life. This song is metaphor of THE life of each person. Each preson in
life surviveS ups and downs.
This song is about A person, who HAS committed in his life a few bad
mistakes, but paid his dues and had come through and later attained
'the' (niepotr) 'succes' (ortog).
THE song gives us 'for' (cos nie tak) apprehension that life is hard and 'have' (life HAS) a lot of 'barriers' (Nie wiem czy to najlepsze slowo). But we 'one' (Niepotr) must never give up . Each person 'have' HAS - a person HAS) in THEIR life problems, but one must never lose hope that IT will be better and FOR 'ours' OUR problems THERE will be solutions. We must be 'a' (niepotr) strong 'ana' (ortog) fight till the end. It is necessary TO always assiduously pursue (ale co?), IN order to become a champion!!

I think that the song " We are the champions" could be a leading song in everybody's life. This song is nothing else but the metaphor of each person's life, because all of us have ups and downs in life.
The song is mostly about the person, who commited few mistakes on his way, but finally paid his dues.He also had to go trough a lot in order to achive a success. The massage of this song is;life is hard and creates many barriers, but nobody should ever give up. All of us have problems in life.

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All of us have problems in life, but none of us should ever lose hop. The problems of everyday life can also become their solutions. People have to stay tough and fight for their success until they'll reach their optimum goal,it is espetially true when someone wants to become a worldwide champion( like...)

Naprawdę bardzo bardzo Wam dziękujeee;));*!