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Last July I decided to go to the seaside resort Mielno with my best friends. Since we didn't have a lot of money, we wanted to make it as cheap as possible.We were planning to stay at a campsite for two weeks. The cheapest way is to get a train to Koszalin and then a bus to Mielno. However, it is also the longest, because the train to Koszalin went for the whole night and stopped at many train stations on the way.
We were lucky. The weather was wonderfull-it was sunny and really hot. We had no time to get bored there. It was always something to do from the early morning until late at night.
We sunbathed, swam, collected shell, ran along coastline, buried ourselfs in the sand. We had great time and burst one's sides with loughter.
In the evening we made campfire. Sometimes we went to town to a concert or to the disco.I was bell of dance flor.
I never forget this holiday. I want to go back there.

However, it 'is' (daj tutaj 'was'- dlatego, ze pozniej piszesz 'went for the...) also the longest, because the train to Koszalin went for the whole night and stopped at many train stations on the way.
The weather was 'wonderfull' (ortog)-it was sunny and really hot.
'It' THERE was always something to do from the early morning until late at night. We sunbathed, swam, collected shellS, ran along THE coastline, buried
'ourselfs' OURSELVES in the sand. We had A great time and burst 'one's' (nie uzywaj tego one's tutaj lepiej OUR) sides with 'loughter' (ortog).
In the evening we made A campfire. Sometimes we went to THE town to a
concert or to the disco.
'I was bell of dance flor' (tego nie rozumiem)
I WILL never forget this holiday.