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Temat: Wady i zalety przyjęcia euro w Polsce.

The joining to European Union is connected with the enterance a new currency to Poland – euro.
It may seem, at first, that it brings only benefits, but further consideration shows that it has also negative effects.

First of all, the foreign trade has become livelier among countries which uses the same currency. It makes lower transaction costs , clearance of prices and lack of currency-risk.

Secondly, all over the Europe there is the one currency. It makes life easier. We don't have to exchange our money on foreign currencies while travelling to foreign european countries.

What is more, introducion euro to Poland, which is country with low economic level, makes Poland to develop and makes it more important.

On the other hand, one of the biggest disadvantage is losing independance. Because of it, polish government doesn't have influence on policy of money in Poland.

Besides, politycy on money in European Central Bank is not adjusted to demands of polish trade economy. It can cause a lot of trouble, for instance unemployment.

In every country which received Euro, there was considered rapid growth of prices in connection with stability of people's earnings. It can have bad impact on our pockets.


To sum up, I would like to say that I do no to like idea of entrance euro to Poland, but I know that it will take place soon. For me, it will be hard to get used to new currency.

The joining to European Union is connected with the 'enterance' (tu masz blad ortog ale i nie to slowo jest potrzebne, daj tutaj INTRODUCTION) OF a new
currency to Poland - euro.
First of all, 'the' (niepotr) foreign trade has become livelier among countries
which 'uses' USE the same currency. It 'makes lower' (napisz REDUCES) transaction costs, 'clearance of prices' (tgo nie rozumiem) and lack of currency-risk.
Secondly, all over 'the' (niepotr) Europe there is 'the' (niepotr) one currency. (Nie za bardzo, w UK jeszcze mamy funty),
We don't have to exchange our money 'on' TO foreign currencies while travelling to foreign European countries.
What is more, 'introducion' (ortog) OF THE euro 'to' IN Poland, which is A country with low economic level, 'makes Poland 'to' (niepotr) develop' (napisz to inaczej...aids the development of Poland) 'and' THUS makING it more important (dodaj ...in the global market).
On the other hand, one of the biggest disadvantage is losing
'independance' (ortog). Because of it, Polish Government doesn't have ANY influence on 'policy of money' (inaczej...the monetary policies) in Poland.
Besides, 'politycy' (nie rozumiem) on money in European Central Bank is not adjusted to THE demands of Polish trade economy. It can cause 'a lot' (tutaj trzeba uzywac wieej formalne slowa...immense) 'of' (niepotr) trouble, for
instance (the rise of) unemployment.
In every country 'which received THE Euro' (nie, napisz to inaczej...where the Euro had been introduced), there was considerABLE rapid growth of prices in connection with THE stability of people's earnings. 'It' (nie wiem do czego to 'it' sie odnosi) can have bad impact on our pockets.
To sum up, I would like to say that I do 'no' NOT 'to' (niepotr) like THE idea of 'entrance' (zle slowo) OF THE euro 'to' IN Poland, but I know that it will take place soon.