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Mam prośbę. Sprawdźcie mój list. Angielskiego uczę się od 2 lat całkiem nieźle mi idzie ale co do tego nie jestem pewna. Zawsze są jakieś błędy :) Oto i ta treść:
I really need to ask you for some advice.I have serious problem.I am typical girl who lives in London.I have lovely mum, but I have not father. He is died when I was small. Only he understood me. I have amazing memories about him.
What is my problem? People call me a dexter. I do not know why.In school I am point out. I am a very good pupil and maybe it is bad. I hate go to school because when is break nobody sit beside me. In turn if my class have exam, everyone likes me. Then they say : Please, help me. You are so sweet and cool. etc. I will not abide more. Why I am overridder? I must be a bad student and a bad person to accept for my peers in order to?
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Czy możecie poprawić moje błędy :) Z góry dziękuję.

A co z 'a' sie stalo?

I have A serious problem.I am A 'typical' (moze lepiej napisz 'ordinary') girl who lives in London. I have A lovely mum, but I 'have not' DO NOT HAVE A
father. He 'is' (niepotr) died when I was small.
I have amazing memories 'about' OF him.
People call me a 'dexter' (nawet nie wiem co to jest).
In school I am pointED out. I am a very good pupil and maybe 'it is bad' (cos tu nie tak). I hate goING to school because 'when is' AT break nobody sitS beside me. In turn if my class 'have' HAS AN exam, everyone likes me.
You are so sweet and cool. 'etc' (do czego to etc. sie odnosi, nie wiem co masz na mysli, ktos Ci mowi, ze jestes etc?). I will not 'abide' (zle slowo) more. Why I am 'overridder' (nie rozumiem co masz na mysli tutaj)?
...I must be a bad student and a bad person to accept for my peers in order to?...tego to nawet nie rozumiem.
To czego nie rozumiem napisz po polsku.