Proszę o sprawdzenie ! PILNE ! ;]

Proszę aby ktoś to sprawdził xD

One day my parents went to the cinema so I was alone in the house. Suddenly I heard strange noises. I looked out the window but I didn't see anything. I turned away and I saw somebody. It was a girl white as a sheet. She was looking at me so I get scared. I closed my eyes and when I open it again ghost disappeared ! I was really frightened. I looked around but she was't here. I ran to my best friends house. When I was running , a car almost run me down !! I told my parents about my adventure but they didn't belive me . After few weeks my neighbour told me that in my house lived a girl at my age. One day she ran out the house and shouted : ' I saw a ghost !! ' . Everybody were laughing. They thought she is mad. At the moment a car ran her down. Maybe I deceive destiny ?

Wiem , wiem ;p historia dość tandetna ;p ale najważniejsza jest poprawność gramatyczna ;D Z góry dziękuje ; ***

Wiem, wiem ;p historia dość tandetna;p - a kto Ci kiedy mowil, ze takie opowiadania maja byc inne ...to nie chodzi o czym opowiadasz, tylko jak.

I looked out OF the window but I didn't see anything.
She was looking at me so I 'get' GOT scared. I closed my eyes and when I openED (czas przeszly) 'it' (ale eyes to l. mnoga, tutasj THEM) again THE ghost disappeared!
I looked around but she 'was't' (popraw) 'here' THERE. I ran to my best friend's house. When I was running, a car almost 'run' RAN me down! I told my parents about my adventure but they didn't 'belive' (ortog) me . After A few weeks my neighbour told me that in my house lived a girl 'at' (niepotr) my age. One day she ran out OF the house and shouted: ''I saw' (nie, tutaj I'VE SEEN a ghost!!. Everybody 'were' WAS laughing. They thought THAT she 'is' WAS mad. At 'the' THAT moment a car ran her down.
Maybe I 'deceive' (tutaj czas przeszly) destiny ?