PROSZĘ o sprawdzenie mi tego opowiadania. Zależy mi na ocenie i to bardzo, będzie miała wpływ na ocenę końcową, a nie umiem dobrze pisać po angielsku. Nie wiem czy dobrze użyłam czasów. Muszę używać Past Simple, moze Past Perfect. Drugie to trzeba wcisnąć kilka idiomów angielskich. Nie wiem czy dobrze je wpisałam, no i jakieś konstrukcje z przymiotnikami i przysłówkami. to moje pierwsze opwiadanie i nie wiem czy wogóle się nadaje? :( Może za krótkie albo za długie?
Dziękuje
I hadn’t got any plan for last holiday, so I decided to organize a trip to the forest with my friends. It was very hot and windy. The weather was perfect for our trip. At heart felt it was an unforgettable adventure.
The scenery was picturesque. And everything would be well until one of us had lost the compass. Nevertheless we continued our trip. After several hours we decided to back, but knew were not the direction. The sky was full of dark clouds and soon it started raining heavily. We gnashed teeth our with cold. I tried to call home, but I've lost my phone. I was a babe in the woods. Suddenly we heard snarl. We turned around with bated breath.
We saw pairs of eyes. We scared to death. "Run!" - I heard. Fluent as quickly as I could. I felt the branches of trees and hurt my hands. I had no idea how long the run. Suddenly I fell down. When I lifted up my eyes I saw my friends and a police officer. "A friend in need is a friend indeed" - he said. I grinned and I was much happier.
After we backed we felt a fairly well. All's well that ends well.
During the rest of the holiday made even more such trips. It was fantastic time with a lot of adventures.