proszę sprawdzić../

Czy czasy i ogólnie jest dobrze..?
1.It was about a week after my third birthday. My aunt gave me a new doll as a present, and while I was playing with it, I noticed that my other dolls were all quite dirty in comparison. I decided to give them a bath. When I washed them all, I took them outside and put them on the grass. It was a warm day and the sun was shining. While I was waiting for the dolls to dry, I heard a shout from inside, so I looked in through the window. Water was pouring down from the kitchen ceiling onto the floor. I didn't turn the taps off in the bathroom. I remember that my dad was really angry because he was decorating the kitchen the previous week.
2.One day when I was about six years old, I with my friends were walking in the wood. We get lost a path. We noticed this not before after some time. We felt very terrible because it was raining and the wind was blowing. My younger sister was very scared. While we were walking my mother rang to our neighbour.
When we come back to home, our friends were waiting in the garden. All people were relieved when they saw our.(ulżyło im gdy nas zobaczyli).
Dzięki...:)

I 'didn't' HAD NOT turnED the taps off in the bathroom. I remember
that my dad was really angry because he 'was' HAD BEEN decorating the kitchen the previous week.
2.One day when I was about six years old, 'I with my friends' (zrob to ...my friends and I) were walking in the wood.
'We get lost a path' (co to jest - az mi sie niechce wierzyc, ze ten tekst jest napisany przez osobe ktora pisala nr 1.).
'We noticed this not before after some time' (czy to ma byc zdaniem?).
We felt 'very' (niepotr) terrible because it was raining and the
wind was blowing.
When we cAme back 'to' (niepotr) home, our friends were waiting in the garden. All THE people were relieved when they saw 'our' (nasze, ale nasze co?)

'We get lost a path'- zgubilismy droge, ze słownika brałam, widze ze chyba źle...albo moze: We lose one's way. ?
'We noticed this not before after some time' - my zauważyliśmy to dopiero po czasie...nie wiem jak napisac inaczej. We noticed about this event after some time. ?
they saw 'our' chodzilo mi o to, ze zobaczyli Nas.

*'We get lost a path'- zgubilismy droge, ze słownika brałam, (chyba zartujesz)
*We lose 'one's' (po co to one's tutaj) way. ...
powinno byc...We lost our way...
'We noticed this 'not before after some time' (to jest bzdura) We noticed this AFTER SOME TIME.
>they saw 'our' chodzilo mi o to, ze zobaczyli Nas. Ale 'nas' to nie 'our'

aha :] dzieki/