Dobre i złe strony weekendu - prośba o sprawdzenie

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Witam!

Mam do napisania opinię na temat weekendu. Mają to być jego dobre i złe strony według mnie. Napisałem coś takiego. Proszę o sprawdzenie i korektę błędów.

Cytat:
For me the best thing about the weekend is that I don’t have to get up early. During the week I have to get up at half past six every day. I hate it because I like sleep very long and I’m an evening person. Another good thing is that I don’t have to go to school. I like going to school, but sometimes simply I would like to stay at home. I love the weekend because I have many free time and I can do all the things I really like – watching TV, playing computer games and going out with my friends.

However, there are some things I don’t like. Firstly I have to go with my family shopping every Saturday. I hate it because shops are always very crowded. Secondly, on Sunday my aunt often arriving to us. She is asking me a lot and she would like know everything about me and my life. I don’t like it.

But in general I love the weekend. I’m very worried when the weekend is over and I have to start a new week. However, the next weekend is in five days…
Odpowie ktoś?? Bardzo proszę, gdyż jutro muszę to oddać...
to popraw:

I like sleep
many free time
my aunt often arriving to us.
she would like know


tak będzie lepiej:
to go shopping with my family
She is asking me a lot of questions
I'm very sad
Dzięki za odpowiedź. To co niżej napisałaś, to poprawię, a to wyżej jak zmienić ?
Jeśli sam napisałeś tę rozprawkę to sobie poradzisz.
Pewnie, że sam pisałem.

Może być tak?
I like to sleep very long
my aunt is arriving to us almost every Sunday
she would like to know everything about me and my life
i jeszcze to:
I have a lot of free time
No widzisz.
my aunt visits us almost every Sunday.
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