Opowiadanie

Zadanie brzmi: Napisz opowiadanie, ktore zaczyna się od następującego zdania: As the clock was striking midnight, there was a loud whisper at the door: 'Let me in!'.
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As the clock was striking midnight there was a loud whisper at the other door "Let me in". Girl behind the door seemed to be my sister, I thought, that something must have hapened. 
I got up and rushed to the door. When I pushed on the knob and opened the door there was nobody there.At the same time I felt freezing breeze cuting through my body. 
I reached out of the room and quietly asked:" Is there anybody out there?" but no one answered.I locked the door and returned to bed wondering about that strange voice.
Unexpetedly I heard it again, she was begging for help.I slowly sat on the edge of my bed and asked:"Who are you? And Where are you?" When I asked those questions blinding light apperaed in front of me. Than a young girl emmerged from it. I was frightened. I asked who she was, what had happened to her and if there was any way I could help her. The girl told me her story, two years ago she had drawned. After the accident nobody could have find the necklace that she had on her neck the day she died and which her family needed very badly.
I realized that one day I found it on the shore of the near river. Mary-the ghost girl, asked me to return it so I did it. Mary thanked me than disapired again and forever. I felt asleep rigth after. 

Nikt?

a musi byc bezbledne? Bo to jest na 5-.

W takim razie dziękuję serdecznie i jestem z siebie zadowolona ;)

PRZEDIMEK Girl behind the door seemed to be my sister
hapened. ORTOGR
I felt PRZEDIMEK freezing breeze cuting through my body.
I reached out CZYLI? SIEGNALEM? of the room
questions PRZEDIMEK blinding light apperaed LITEROWKA
Than = NIŻ
emmerged ORTOGR
if there was any way I could help her. JEJKU, JA BYM POWIEDZIAL KYSZ,, KYSZ, JAKBYM SIE TAK BAL :-)
two years ago - A TO SIE W TYM ROKU ZDARZYŁO?
drawned. NIE MA TAKIEGO SLOWA
After the accident nobody could find I ZADNYCH PERFECT INFINITIVES - TO ZNACZY 'NIE MOGL ZNALEZC', A NIE 'NIE MOGLBY ZNALEZC'

I realized that one day I MOWA ZALEZNA, NIE? NO TO JAKI CZAS found it on the near river. 'POBLISKI' TO NIE NEAR BY SIE DOWIEDZIEC JAK TO MA BY C, ZAJRZALA BY S DO SLOWNIKA
Mary-the ghost girl, asked me to return it AND so I did.
than NIŻ
disapired ORTOGR
rigth

może jeszcze to? :) https://www.ang.pl/Opowiadanie_81839.html

rowniez,
>...felt? asleep...

od "fall asleep"

no wlasnie: felt nie jest od fall
w drugim opowiadanku sa podobne bledy i troche roblemow z szybkiem zdania 'most he liked'. Nie czytalem zreszta calego, nie mam czasu go poprawic.