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Bardzo proszę o poprawę tego fragmentu artykułu, jestem kiepska z angielskiego i dlatego też jestem sobie w stanie wyobrazić ile błędów popełniłam, jednak prosze o wyrozumiałość. Z góry bardzo dziękuję i pozdrawiam ;)

Hello! Let me introduce myself. My name is Ada and I from Polish. I'm sixteen years old. I love shoping but I have them in control. I prefer pracical, informal and casual style and I like the urban style becouse it's contains a lot's a variety. I don't have a wordrobe but when I grow up unguestionable I'll have .
I don't like outrageous clothes and dull colours becouse I think that the colour our clothes say about us.
As a matter of fact my favourite clothes are my fancy tops becouse they aren't boring and stand out in a crowd.
Hello! Let me introduce myself. My name is Ada and I from POLAND. I'm sixteen years old. I love shopPing but I have IT in control. I prefer pracical, informal and casual style and I like the urban style becAuse IT contains a lot OF variety. I don't have a wordrobe but when I grow up unguestionable I'll have .
I don't like outrageous clothes and dull colours becAuse I think that the colour OF our clothes sayS SOMETHING about us.
As a matter of fact my favourite clothes are my fancy tops becAuse they aren't boring and stand out in a crowd.

Zapewne to nie wszystkie błędy, ale po szybkim rzuceniu okiem porpawiłam conieco ;]
I love shopPing but I have IT 'in' (Nie 'in' ale UNDER control.
I don't have a wordrobe but when I grow up 'unguestionable' (zla czesc zdania i slowo nie pasuje do reszty) I'll have (ale I'll have WHAT?) .
Hello! Let me introduce myself. My name is Ada and I from Poland. I'm sixteen years old. I love adventures and package tour. I'm really talkative and kind, but sometimes I'm impatient and a little unpredcitable. I love shopping but I have it under control. I prefer pracical, informal and casual style and I like the urban style because it contains a lots of variety. I don't have a wordrobe but when I grow up I'll have it.
I don't like outrageous clothes and dull colours because I think that the colour of our clothes says something about us.
As a matter of fact my favourite clothes are my fancy tops because boring and stand out in a crowd. Usually I wear a jeand, because trousers fit the my T - shirts and are very pracitcal. I'm choosing conmon clothes because I feel so good and freely when I wear it. Comfortable is very important.
When I'm wearing this clothes I can do everything, it isn't limiting my moves. I know that my favourites clothes it isn't creative and imaginative but that unimportant, because I really like it. Belive me simple dresses musn't be boring.

Bardzo was proszę o sprawdzenie, poprawiłam pierwszą część tak jak mi radziliście i bardzo dziękuję ;) Zauważyłam strasznie dużo 'because' w mojej wypowiedzi, jaki mogłabym zastosować zamiennik ? I mam pytanie co do ostatniego zdania, jak poprawie napisać ' Proste ubrania nie muszą być nudne' ? :) dziękuję z góry i przepraszam za kłopot.
I love adventures and package tourS (l. mnoga).
I prefer 'pracical' (ortog), informal and casual style (tutaj mozna dodac 'of clothes') and I like the urban style because it contains a lots of variety. I don't have a 'wordrobe' (ortog) YET, but when I grow up I'll have 'it' (ale tutaj ja to zrozumialam jako 'szafa', a nie to co masz na mysli, jako 'wardrobe of clothes'.
As a matter of fact my favourite clothes are my fancy tops because THEY ARE NOT boring and I stand out in a crowd. Usually I wear 'a' (niepotr) 'jeand' (ortog), because THESE trousers 'fit' (tutaj zle slowo- masz na mysli MATCH 'the' (niepotr) my T-shirts and THEY are very 'pracitcal' (ortog). 'I'm choosing' (zly czas. I CHOOSE 'conmon' (nie, ortog ale i tak zle slowo, 'common' w UK znaczy calkowicie cos innego, 'common' znaczy prawie 'uliczne', ubrania ktore ubieraja kobiety 'pracujace w zawodzie, uzyj tutaj slowo EVERYDAY clothes because I feel so good and 'freely' FREE when I wear 'it' THEM.
'Comfortable' (zla czesc zdania, tutaj COMFORT is very important.
When I'm wearing 'this' THESE (this odnosi sie do l. poj, a tutaj 'clothes') clothes I can do everything, 'it' THEY ARE NOT 'isn't' (niepotr) limiting my moves. I know that my favourites clothes it isn't creative and
'imaginative' (zla czesc zdania, tutaj IMAGINATION 'but that unimportant' (tego pojecia calkowicie nie rozumiem), because I really like it. 'Belive' (ortog) me
simple dresses 'musn't' DO NOT HAVE TO be boring.
JESTEŚ NIESAMOWITA. Dziękuję, dziękuję, dziękuję ; *
Sorry, tutaj podalam zle, prosze poprawic...
I know that my favourites clothes 'it isn't' ARE NOT creative and imaginative (zle przeczytalam zdanie - tutaj ma byc IMAGINITIVE) but that is unimportant.
...I from Poland,
...our clothes says,
...unpredcitable,
...IMAGINITIVE,
tak przeoczylam,
I AM from Poland,
our clothes SAY
unpredictable
imaginAtive
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