Moje ulubione miejsce!

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Moje zadanie domowe o moim ulubionym miejscu (w zadaniu miało byc zwarte:
- co jest moim ulubionym mijscem i gdzie ono jest
- dlaczego lubie to miejsce
- co przewaznie tam robię
- w podsumowaniu dlaczego jest wyjatkowe
miało byc okolo 100 słow i nauczyciel powiedzial ze najlepeij w czasie presen simple )

My favourite place is a park near house. I like to go there with my dog, it's the place, where I can think about all my problems. It relaxes me and helps me everytime. I need it. Walks between those big and olds trees makes me feel diffrent, like in fairy tale. It is also a great place to spend same time with friends, we visit that park almost every weekend. So I visit my favourite place everytime I can, finds the energy for the rest of the hard week, and it really works! That place is really one of the kind for me, and of course for my dog:)

proszę o znalezienie błędów gramatycznych stylistycznych itd:) Liczę na pomoc!
My favourite place is a park near MY house.
Walks between those big and 'olds' OLD trees makes me feel 'diffrent' (ortog), like in A fairy tale. It is also a great place to spend 'same' SOME time with friends, we visit that park almost every weekend. So I visit my favourite place everytime I can, TO 'finds' FIND the energy for the rest of the hard week, and it really works!
That place is really one of 'the' ITS kind for me, and of course for my
dog:)

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