List, pomoc

Dear Dan,

Thanks for your last letter. It was nice to hear from you. Sorry that I haven’t written for a month, because I’m going to a new school and I’m really busy.

I love that school! It has got a very good atmosphere and teachers. I meet new friends and I’m happy so I chose that’s school.

The big news is that my parents want to come to you in Summer, I can’t wait longer to meet you. I think it will be really fantastic. Try disabling your computer and getting ready to a party.

Anyway, That’s all about me, What about you? Have you bought a new car yet?, Have your father found a job? I’m going to learn Biology and I’m waiting for your letter!

I'm looking forward for your reply,

Marcin

Zapomniałem dopisać, Bardzo proszę o sprawdzenie poprawności językowej.

Przepraszam, że nie pisałem, ALE (a nie "ponieważ").

this school

I
>meet new friends and I'm happy so I chose that's school.
Coś Ci się tu pokićkało.

I am making new friends and I'm so happy that I chose this school.


>The big news is that my parents want to come to you in Summer, I
>can't wait longer to meet you.
To zdanie jest nielogiczne.
pory roku piszemy małą literą

>Try disabling your computer
Co ma zrobić z komputerem?

getting ready FOR a party

>Have your father found a job?
3 osoba tu jest :)

Nie wiem o co chodzi z tą biology (nie Biology) w następnym zdaniu. Po co o tym wspominasz?

Poprawiłem ale wydaje mi się, że znowu coś pokręciłem. Z tą biologią chodzi o to, że mam jakoś zakończyć ten list w stylu "kończe już bo muszę coś zrobić np. uczyć się"

Dear Dan,

Thanks for your last letter. It was nice to hear from you. Sorry that I haven’t written for a month, but I’m going to a new school and I’m really busy.

I love that school! It has got a very good atmosphere and teachers. I’m making new friends and I'm so happy that I chose this school.

The big news is that my parents want to come to you in summer. I think it will be really fantastic. I’ll get a ball and we were playing football all the day. I want to meet your friends and see a new club in your city so you should getting ready for a party.

Anyway, That’s all about me, What about you? Have you bought a new car yet?, Has your father found a job? Tomorrow I’ve got a short test and I’m going to learn biology. I’m waiting for your letter!

I'm looking forward for your reply,

Marcin

Ponawiam prośbę o sprawdzenie, mam to na jutro :O

>The big news is that my parents want to come to you in summer. I
>think it will be really fantastic. I'll get a ball and we were playing
>football all the day. I want to meet your friends and see a new club
>in your city so you should getting ready for a party.

Dalej nie wiem o co tu chodzi. Skąd ci rodzice się tu wzięli i po co?

...moi rodzice chcą Cie odwiedzić w lecie?

want to come to you = kalka z polskiego

....my parents want to visit you in the summer.


I'll get a ball and we were playing
>football all the day.
Czasy pomieszałeś.
Wezmę piłkę i graliśmy...

I want to meet your friends and see a new club
>in your city so you should getting ready for a party.
...so you should get ready for a party.

Tomorrow I've got a short test and
>I'm going to learn biology.

Napisz tak: Jutro mam krótki test z biologii (biology test) więc muszę iść uczyć się.