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In the small village nervous beaver bites old man. This beast threw themselves on Mr John and bits him whole leg. That day Mr, John went outside, suddently saw rushing him toward black fur, beaver fell on his leg and terribly stung. after
mr.john felt flows the blood. when mr.john began to shout with pain, neighbors ran, beaver had escaped. After a moment the police arrvied and hunters and told "we must kill a beaver" Mr John was transported to hospital where he undergoes a series of treatments. Who would have thought that such a small beaver can be a deadly beats.

dziękuje.
mieszasz czas przeszly i terazniejszy. Za duzo tez jest polskiej gramatyki.
To bym prosił o poprawę, bo sam tego nie znajde przecież. dziekuje
moim zdaniem to trzeba napisac od nowa.

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