karrramba 4 Lis 2009, 20:42 odpowiedz Zgłoś wpis do usunięcia
witam.
proszę o sprawdzenie listu formalnego. Bede bardzo wdzieczna.
Dear Mrs. Jessica Brown
I am writing with thanks for your talk in Third Liceum in Warsaw at 2nd September. Your talk about alternative energy sources was really curious and students were very interested.
I am writing to you with another business too. You left behind your hat in our school. You put it down in my office when we was drinking a coffee. Then you went to assembly hall to talk about alternative energy sources and you forget about your hat.
I called to you, but the number was unavailable. The number was probably, because my secretary is old and she could do a mistake when she wrote down your telephone number. I decided to write a letter, because I have you address only. Please contact me and arrange the meeting when I can give you your hat,
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely
Director of Third Liceum in Warsaw
Mr. John Down
terri 4 Lis 2009, 21:15 odpowiedz Zgłoś wpis do usunięcia
Dear Mrs. 'Jessica' (nie dajemy imiona) Brown,
I am writing 'with' TO OFFER MY GRATEFUL thanks for your talk GIVEN in THE Third Liceum in Warsaw 'at' (co to?- ON THE 2nd OF September (a rok to jest panstwowa tajemnnica?).
Your talk about alternative energy sources was really 'curious' (zle slowo - popraw) and ALL THE students were very interested.
'I am writing to you with another business too' (nie rozumiem tego zdania i tak nie piszemy...I am writing to you ON ANOTHER MATTER.
You left behind your hat in our school. You put it down in my office when 'we was' (a w ktorym podreczniku tak Ciebie nauczyli '*we was' OD KIEDY - popraw) drinking 'a' (niepotr) coffee. Then you went to THE assembly hall to talk about THE alternative energy sources and you 'forget' (czas przeszly FORGOT about your hat.
I called 'to' (niepotr) you, but the number I HAD was unavailable. The number was probably (ale probably CO? -), 'because my secretary is old' (takich rzeczy NIGDY nie piszemy- CO TY?) and she could HAVE 'do' MADE a mistake when she wrote down your telephone number.
I decided to write a letter, because I have ONLY 'you' YOUR address. 'only' (niepotr).
Please contact me and arrange 'the' A meeting when I can 'give you' RETURN your hat TO YOU.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely
najpierw dajemy imie ...Mr. John Down
a pozniej pozycje/title
Director of Third Liceum in Warsaw
karrramba 4 Lis 2009, 21:44 odpowiedz Zgłoś wpis do usunięcia
Dziękuję bardzo i pozdrawiam serdecznie :)
asiap.bella 11 Lis 2009, 18:15 odpowiedz Zgłoś wpis do usunięcia
Hej, moje zadanie to napisac list formalny to prezesa mojej firmy, zeby nam zwiekszyl liczbe godzin angielskiego(w tej chwili firma organizuje zajecia-2 godz. w tygodniu). Coś tam naskrobalam, ale na pewno ktores z Was bedzie w stanie mi pomoc i go ulepszyc:)
Dear Mr. President K.C,
I am writing with regard to English course organized by our company (czy podac pelna nazwe firmy?).
At the moment there are only two hours of English classes per week. It would assist me if the course was expanded to seven hours a week.
In my opinion, increasing number of hours would be a great chance for everyone who attends the classes to improve English skills. It is very important to speak English fluently without mistakes and lessons with native speaker would give a good effect so Samsung employees would be able to speak English better and be even more effective in their cooperation with English-speaking customers. Some of us attend workshops or trainings in English. To fully understand the purpose of it and to take active part in it.
I would appreciate it if you, dear Mr. President, took my request in consideration.
I look forward to receiving your reply in this matter at your earliest convenience.
Your sincerely,
J.P