'In these days' (a dlaczego nie NOWADAYS?), one of the biggest 'values' (to slowo dla mnie tutaj nie pasuje - poszukaj inne) for many people is 'a' (niepotr) success.
For some it is a well paid job and for otherS a happy family life. It
happens that 'they' (ale do kogo to 'they' sie odnosi, do tych pierwszych czy drugich?) want to achieve it by all means. 'Despite that' (ale despite czego? dla mnie to nie jest jasne) I have my own definition of success which includes having A 'respectable' (za ogolne - to znaczy ile?) salary as well as A happy wife and children.(and I take it you still believe in fairy tales?)
'Similarly' (zle slowo-pomysl o czesci zdania) to other views (ale te views to czyje? moje? kolegi?), 'a' (jak napiszesz 'a' to musisz wyszczegolnic co ty nazywasz sukcesem) success is what I want to achieve in my life. I hope that 'values' (nie za bartdzo to slowo pasuje) like hard work, patience and perseverance will help me fulfill my dreams 'about' (nie, pomysl co chcesz powiedziec tutaj) success.
To start with, my first step in 'a' THE ladder of success is graduation and
obtaining the title OF “Bachelor of Arts" in English (language, literature, linguistics? - dopisz). Contrary to popular 'beliefs' BELIEF it is inconceivably hard to get this title. Being a student 'on' (znowu ta kalka z polskiego 'na' - ile razy musze to samo powtarzac, Polski odpowiednik 'na'; nie zawsze tlumaczymy jako 'on' w jez. ang. tutaj akurat jestes studentem AT A) tertiary school, especially on English philology requires 'a lot of' (to jest za niskie - pomysl o czyms na wyzszym stopniu formalnosci np. 'tremendous') effort, stamina and agility of THE mind. Graduating from such a school opens 'in front of' (lepiej TO you many doors of possibilities in the 'job' (poszukaj slowo na wyzszym szczeblu..np employment) market. A person who knows A foreign language 'like' SUCH AS English is needed almost everywhere.
Next, after graduation the most important thing is 'looking' TO LOOK for
suitable work, which in my case is becoming A shareholder in communication network. It is almost impossible to become 'someone like that' (zle pojecie p[omysl o tym i napisz inaczej) without contacts. In the beginning, I have to start working as a mobile 'phones' PHONE seller and work my way up. Though, even in 'than' THAT there is no guarantee that I get what I was dreaming about. But someone once said: “'there is nothing impossible.' (NIESTETY jak juz robisz 'quotes' to prosze to napisac tak jak to bylo powiedziane, to znaczy "NOTHING IS IMPOSSIBLE')
Finally, time 'has' WOULD come for starting MY own family. NewLY married (ale co? tutaj brakuje COUPLES should have THEIR own home, they definitely cannot 'leave' (tutaj masz calkowicie zle slowo - pomysl i popraw) with 'a' (nie dajemy 'a' przed l. mnoga a 'parentS' to l. mn) parents. This is A time when people 'are starting' SHOULD START to take full responsibilities for their
actions, both good and 'wrong' BAD (the opposite of 'good' jest 'bad', the opposite of 'right' jest 'wrong). They learn TO DO THAT 'it' (niepotr) on their own. In order to make it work and give happiness to their families they should divide work 'form' (mysle, ze tylko liter. inaczej zle slowo) personal life.
To sum up, 'a' THE success of a young person depends 'from' ON many factors. It
is certain, that not everyone will achieve THEIR own goals. Only the persistent and maybe 'these' THOSE who have good fortune will have THE opportunity
to check how it is to drive to the end of THE route with THE inscription success.
ok, ale musisz nad tym jeszcze popracowac.