Dialog...pilne

Witam..proszę o sprawdzenie dialogu...starałam się aby wszystko było poprawnie...Możecie mi sprawdzić i poprawić błędy??

A: Hello. I have to ask you some questions about new candidate of European Sales Director.
B: Hello. Ok. What would you like to know?
A: When was Andrea Paganini born?
B: She was born on 1st June 1963. What’s her nationality?
A: It’s British/Italian. How many years has she her correspondence course?
B: She has her correspondence course for 2 years. Where did she obtain Diploma In Marketing Studies?
A: In 1994 When did she start work as Research scientist in University of London Hospital?
B: In 1987. Where did she work between 1989-1991?
A: She worked in European Commision in Brussels. How many years she has been a Head of Research in AVRC Pharmaceuticals?
B: She worked here for 3 years. Where did she start work in Pharmaline, Paris and what is her place now?
A: She started this work in 1998. She has been a Marketing Manager. Since when she has been a Marketing Manager?
B: Since 2000.
A: What is her third language which she knows fluently?
B: It’s French.
A: Ok. Now maybe we should talk about remaining candidates, about advantages and disadvantages?
B: Yes, you are right.
A: What similarities are there between Andrea’s and Luis Antonino’s professional experience?
B: Both of them have a long experience. They worked in AVRC too. They have additional courses too. They worked in drug research centers.
A: They know 3 languages too. And who is a better candidate for this job in your opinion?
B: Luis is a better candidate. She has a longer and better experience. She is hard working, creative and ambitious too.
A: Andrea is better only in their languages because she knows their languages better. Luis is on the French course. And she will be better when she will know French in fluent. That’s why I agree with you, Luis is a better candidate.

Proszę pomóżcie :(

A: Hello. I have to ask you some questions about THE new 'candidate of' (niepotr) European Sales Director.
A: It's British/Italian. 'How many years has she her correspondence
course?' (.....tego nawet nie rozumiem)
>B: 'She has her' (to jest zle, chyba msz na mysli...how long has she been taking her correspondence course..She has taken her) correspondence course for 2 years. 'Where' (...ale where to na odpowiedz nie moze byc rok? where-to gdzie a nie kiedy) did she obtain THE Diploma In Marketing Studies?
A: In 1994 When did she start work as A Research scientist 'in' AT THE University of London Hospital?
B: In 1987. Where did she work between 1989-1991?
A: She worked 'in' FOR THE European Commision in Brussels. How many years HAD she 'has' (niepotr) been 'a' THE Head of Research in AVRC Pharmaceuticals?
B: She worked 'here' THERE for 3 years. 'Where' (MIeszasz where a 'when' tutaj WHEN) did she start work in Pharmaline, Paris and 'what is her place now' (tego nie rozumiem)?
A: She started this work in 1998. She 'has been' WAS 'a' THE Marketing Manager.
'Since when she has been a Marketing Manager?' (popraw to zdanie-)
B: Since 2000.
A: Ok. Now maybe we should talk about THE remaining candidates, about
'advantages and disadvantages' (NIE, nie tak, ludzie nie maja advantages/disadvantages, ludzie maja dobre i zle strony/walory)?
B: Both of them have 'a' (niepotr) long experience. They have TAKEN additional courses too.
A: Andrea is better only in 'their' (nie, tutaj THE)languages because she knows 'their' ('ich'-ale kogo masz na mysli?) languages better. And she will be better when she 'will know' KNOWS French 'in fluent' (co to? kurcze blade, co ty piszesz? FLUENTLY).

Terri dziękuję bardzo jesteś niezastąpiona... naniosłam poprawki i uwagi co chciałam powiedzieć... sa jeszcze jakies błędy?


W zadaniu chodzi o uzupełnienie luk w CV kandydatki na to stanowisko… 2 osoby mają inne luki w cv I pytają się o to…
A: Hello. I have to ask you some questions about the new 'candidate of' (myślę ze to potrzebne,…albo czy moze jakoś inaczej to ująć??) European Sales Director.
B: Hello. Ok. What would you like to know?
A: When was Andrea Paganini born?
B: She was born on 1st June 1963. What’s her nationality?
A: It's British/Italian. How long has she been taking her correspondence course..?
B: She has taken her correspondence course for 2 years. When did she obtain the Diploma In Marketing Studies?
A: In 1994 When did she start work as a Research scientist at the University of London Hospital?
B: In 1987. Where did she work between 1989-1991?
A: She worked for the European Commision in Brussels. How many years had she been the Head of Research in AVRC Pharmaceuticals?
B: She worked there for 3 years.When did she start work in Pharmaline, Paris and 'what is her place now' (tego nie rozumiem- chciałam tutaj zapytać tak żeby w odpowiedzi było - > Marketing Manager)?
A: She started this work in 1998. She was the Marketing Manager. How long has she been a Marketing Manager?
B: Since 2000.
A: What is her third language which she knows fluently?
B: It’s French.
A: Ok. Now maybe we should talk about the remaining candidates, about
good and bad sides?
B: Yes, you are right.
A: What similarities are there between Andrea’s and Luis Antonino’s professional experience?
B: Both of them have long experience. They worked in AVRC too. They have taken additional courses too. They worked in drug research centers.
A: They know 3 languages too. And who is a better candidate for this job in your opinion?
B: Luis is a better candidate. She has a longer and better experience. She is hard working, creative and ambitious too.
A: Andrea is better only in their languages because she knows languages better. Luis is on the French course. And she will be better when she will know French fluently. That’s why I agree with you, Luis is a better candidate.

A: Hello. I have to ask you some questions about the new 'candidate
'of' (tutaj poytrzeba slowa FOR the position of the new European Sales Director.
A: She worked for the European CommiSsion in Brussels.
B: When did she start work in Pharmaline, Paris and what is her 'place' (nie, tutaj napisz 'position' now
.... she is now their Marketing Manager?
A: Ok. Now maybe we should talk about the remaining candidates, about
good and bad 'sides' (zamiast 'sides' uzyj slowo 'aspects')?

Ok naniosłam poprawki ... czy jeszcze coś nie tak ?? bo mi się wydaje że w niektórych zdaniach są błędy :/ bo dziwnie brzmią

A: Hello. I have to ask you some questions about the new for the position of the new European Sales Director.
B: Hello. Ok. What would you like to know?
A: When was Andrea Paganini born?
B: She was born on 1st June 1963. What’s her nationality?
A: It's British/Italian. How long has she been taking her correspondence course..?
B: She has taken her correspondence course for 2 years. When did she obtain the Diploma In Marketing Studies?
A: In 1994 When did she start work as a Research scientist at the University of London Hospital?
B: In 1987. Where did she work between 1989-1991?
A: She worked for the European Commission in Brussels. How many years had she been the Head of Research in AVRC Pharmaceuticals?
B: She worked there for 3 years. When did she start work in Pharmaline, Paris and 'what is her position now?
A: She started this work in 1998. She was the Marketing Manager. How long she is now their Marketing Manager?
B: Since 2000.
A: What is her third language which she knows fluently?
B: It’s French.
A: Ok. Now maybe we should talk about the remaining candidates, about
good and bad aspects?
B: Yes, you are right.
A: What similarities are there between Andrea’s and Luis Antonino’s professional experience?
B: Both of them have long experience. They worked in AVRC too. They have taken additional courses too. They worked in drug research centers.
A: They know 3 languages too. And who is a better candidate for this job in your opinion?
B: Luis is a better candidate. She has a longer and better experience. She is hard working, creative and ambitious too.
A: Andrea is better only in their languages because she knows languages better. Luis is on the French course. And she will be better when she will know French fluently. That’s why I agree with you, Luis is a better candidate.

są jeszcze jakieś błędy??

A: Hello. I have to ask you some questions about the new CANDIDATE for the
position of the new European Sales Director.

They worked in AVRC 'too' (nie wiem czy to jest potrzebne, jak obydwoje tam pracowali, to napisz...They BOTH worked at...).
A: They know 3 languages 'too' (tak samo tutaj,...they both know...).