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Hi! My name is Karolina and I’m 16. I’m going to the first class of the secondary school. I’m looking for a flat because I hate approach for school every day. I must get up at 5 o’clock; it is a terrible!
I can’t stand rock music, but maybe some other time it will be changed. In my free time, I enjoy painting and watching DVDs. I’m interested in handwork. My friends said that I’m a great cook. On Wednesdays I usually go to the shopping with my friend.
I hope so our living in your flat can be a great. Waiting for your reply and enter the price flat.
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Hi! My name is Karolina and I'm 16. I'm IN the first class of secondary school. I'm looking for a flat because I hate (approach for???..nie wiem o co Ci chodzi MY commute to moze?) school every day. I must get up at 5 o'clock; it is a terrible!
I can't stand rock music, but maybe IN time
THT will (be changed...zly czas). In my free time, I enjoy painting and watching DVDs. I'm interested in handwork???(nie rozumiem(. My friends (said..zly czas) that I'm a great cook. On Wednesdays, I usually go shopping with my friend.
I hope our living (together?)in your flat can be (czy "will be"..nie wiem dkladnie co chcess powiedziec) great. Waiting for your reply and enter??? the price OF THE flat.

HI hate approach for school every day

...I hate 'approach' (zle slowo- poszukaqj nie 'approach' tylko to co masz na mysli) 'for' (dla szkoly? dlaczego uzywasz ''for' jak ma byc TO, you go TO school.)every day

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Hi! My name is Karolina and I'm 16. I'm in the first class of secondary school. I'm looking for a flat because I hate go to school every day. I must get up at 5 o'clock; it is a terrible!
I can't stand rock music, but maybe some in time think will be change. In my free time, I enjoy painting and watching DVDs. I'm interested in handicrafts. My friends sainig that I'm a great cook. On Wednesdays I usually go shopping with my friend.
I hope that our living in your flat will be a nice. I’m waiting for your reply and quote the price of the flat.