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Dear Paul
How are you? I'm writing to you to tell you about the great concert U2. I saw it last saturday at night at the cinema.
Concert was broadcasted from O2 area in Prague.I waited 5 hours to buy a ticket and i must paid 80 each, but it was well worth it!
There was unforgettable feel-the spectacular sights andsound cheerful fans shouted windly,when they saw Bono.All band looked admirable.U2 played many works from their albums.Magnanimous atmosphere granted artists for this reason programme was completely other than assumptions.
On the other hand I was upset that the concert my favourite band was far away from city when I live and that price tickets was to big.
I think it was one with the best concerts of all whose I wached. You must go with me to the next concert.Write soon,tell me what you think about this music and when we go to U2 concert?
Love,
John
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I'm writing to you to tell you about the great U2 concert 'U2.' (niepotr) I saw it last Saturday (dni tyg duzymi literami) 'at' (niepotr) night at the cinema.
THE concert was 'broadcasted' BROADCAST from THE O2 area in Prague.I waited 5 hours to buy a ticket and 'i' (I zawsze duza litera) 'must' HAD TO 'paid' PAY 80 (czego- napisz) each, but it was well worth it!
There was AN unforgettable feel (to the concert) - the spectacular sights and sound OF cheerful fans WHO shouted 'windly' (zle slowo-popraw),when they saw Bono.
THE magnanimous atmosphere granted TO THE artists for this reason 'programme' (nie rozumiem co to slowo tutaj robi) was completely 'other than assumptions' (tego nie rozumiem).
On the other hand I was upset that the concert OF my favourite band
was far away from city when I live and that THE price OF THE tickets was 'to' (zle slowo-popraw) 'big' (nie, tak nie mowimy- lepiej HIGH).
I think it was one with the best concerts of all 'whose' (zle slowo) THOSE WHGICHG I HAVE 'wached' (ortog).
Write soon,tell me what you think about this music and when CAN we go to U2 concert?

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