List formalny do trenera- proszę o sprawdzenie

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Witam, mam do napisania list formalny o takim temacie: you want to set up a football team. write a letter to a well known sportsman or coach asking for advice about the way of preparing fundamental things connected with it leading the team

Więc napisałam jak umiałam prosiłabym o sprawdzenie i ewentualne poprawienie:

Dear Mr Beenhakker

My name is XYZ and I live in a small city on the Masuria-XXX. I would like to set up a football team.. I am writing to You asking for advice about the way of preparing fundamental things connected with it leading the team.

Another, I would be grateful if You could inform me how to prepare for training exercises during the team was doing the best results in season. Rother, I would like to know more about how the best settings for players on the pitch during a match. Finalny I write for information about the burden they have to practice to have the strength to play a match.

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Thanking you in advance for Your co-operation.

Your sincerely
XYZ
My name is XYZ and I live in a small city IN the LAKE DISTRICT OF Masuria-XXX. I would like to set up a football team. I am writing to ou (mala litera) TO ask for advice about the (best?)way of preparing fundamental things connected with leading the team.

I would ALSO be grateful if ou could inform me how to prepare training exercises THAT WOULD PRODUCE THE best results for the team. I would ESPECIALLY like to know (albo learn) more about how TO best POSITION players on the pitch during a match. Finalny (orto) I would APPRECIATE SOME information about the [burden they have to practice ...nie rozumiem o co tu chodzi]to have the strength to play a match.

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Thanking you in advance for our co-operation (lepiej assistance).

YourS sincerely,

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