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Saturday, November 21, 2009
Dear komputronik.pl shop service,
I am writing to complain about keyboard I bought two weeks ago from your online shop. It has very annoying faults that make this keyboard hard to use.
Keys: q, w, e, r and touch panel do not work at all.
I am also dissatisfied due to bad contact. I have written you six e-mails so far and I did not get any reply. Contact is very important in e-shopping. You must do something with this.
One of the most important things in online shopping is time. I ordered the keyboard two weeks ago and I received it only yesterday. That is not fair.

I expect full refund of money. I have receipt for the product and it is under guarantee.

I look forward to hearing from you soon,
XYZ.

I am writing to complain about THE keyboard I bought two weeks ago from
your online shop. It has very annoying faults that make this keyboard
'hard' (moze lepiej 'difficult') to use.
'I am also dissatisfied due to bad contact' (tego zdania nie rozumiem).
I have written you six e-mails so far and I 'did' HAVE not 'get' GOT any reply.
I expect A full refund of (my) money. I have THE receipt for the product and it
is STILL under guarantee.

cytuję:
'I am also dissatisfied due to bad contact' (tego zdania nie rozumiem).

Chciałem napisać, że jestem niezadowolony z powodu złego/słabego kontaktu (ze sprzedawcą). Mógłbyś coś zaproponować?

'I am also dissatisfied due to bad contact'
Lepiej..I am also dissatisfied due to the lack of contact from your side.

Dzięki, temat do zamknięcia.