KROTKIE ZDANIA DO SPRAWDZENIA

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In the last weekend, in the afternoon I was walking in the hill next to my home.
The weather was very beautiful. The scenery was fantastic.
Unexpectedly when I was walking I saw two beautiful animals. These were the deers.
Deers fast ran. Suddenly, first deer crashed. I ran up him. I called the vet. After a chile the doctor came. The animal broke a leg. When The doctor was curing a animal I went to my home.

>{} Last weekend in the afternoon, I was walking in the {hills near} my home.
>The weather was very beautiful {and} the {views were} fantastic.
>{Suddenly,} I saw two beautiful animals. {They}
>were {} deer.
>{The} deer {runs fast}. {Unexpectedly} ,{one of the two deer} crashed {into a fence}. I ran up {to it and} called
>{a} vet. After a {while,} the doctor came. The animal {had broken} a leg. (lub jesli nie przerabiales jeszcze past perfect: The animal had a broken leg.) When
>the {vet} was {helping the} animal, I went {back} to my home.

'Sprawdzić' (czy nie lepiej byloby napisac...'Prosze o sprawdzenie', czy w ogole jakies maniery juz was nie ucza w szkolach, na rozkazy to idz do wojska, tutaj pytamy sie w sposob kulturalny!!!)ks napisany tekst.

'In' (niepotr) 'the' (niepotr) Last weekend,(ale weekend to Sobota i Niedziele, lepiej napisac dzien) in the afternoon I was walking in the hill next to my home.
These were 'the' TWO deers.
Deers 'fast ran' (zla kol slow). Suddenly, THE first deer 'crashed' (nie, nie tak, jak 'crash', to crash into something, vhyba tutaj myslisz o 'fell). I ran up TO him.
After a 'chile' (popraw- to zle slowo) the 'doctor' (tutaj VET came. The animal HAD brokeN a leg. When the 'doctor' VET was 'curing' (nie za bardzo dobre slowo-poszukaj inne) a animal I went to my home.

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Yesterday, in the afternoon I was walking in the hill next to my home.
The weather was very beatiful animals. These were the two deers. The deers run quickly. Suddenly the first deer fell. I ran up to him. I called the vet. After few minutes the vet came. The animal had broken a leg. When the vet helping a animal I went to my home
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"Nouns with identical singular and plural
Some nouns spell their singular and plural exactly alike; some linguists regard these as regular plurals. Many of these are the names of animals:

deer
moose
sheep
bison
salmon
pike
trout
fish
swine
The plural deers is listed in some dictionaries,[7] but is widely considered to be an error. As a general rule, game or other animals are often referred to in the singular for the plural in a sporting context: "He shot six brace of pheasant", "Carruthers bagged a dozen tiger last year", whereas in another context such as zoology or tourism the regular plural would be used. Similarly, nearly all kinds of fish have no separate plural form (though there are exceptions such as rays, sharks or lampreys). And the word "fish" itself is also troublesome, being generally used as a plural when in the context of food, but forming a regular plural otherwise (thus "three lots of fish and chips", "the industry landed 5,200 tonnes of fish in 1998" but "the order of fishes", "the miracle of the loaves and fishes" the phrase "sleep with the fishes"); usage does vary, however, so that for example the phrase "five fish in an aquarium" might to another native user be "five fishes in an aquarium". Using the plural form fish would imply many individual fish of the same species while fishes would imply many individual fish of differing species"