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Cześć, czy mógłby mi ktoś sprawdzić moje wypociny...
Na pewno mam mnóstwo błędów:/!

To jest odpowiedź na pytanie:

Would you prefer to do In future: work for one company or work for several different companies?

In my future, i think that i will prefer work for several different companies. I wants develop my career move and I will search this company which offer me career opportunities. I will research a new skills and suitable experience. A job in a office and a job in a nine to five for me is a boring. A will have a flextime work in rapidly growing company. I want have frequent travel in all over the world and meet new person. When I achieve targets in one firm I will change company in next. However, when I have fifty years old, probably a will stay in one firm and I will wait for a pension.

Jeśli ktoś ma jeszcze pomysł, żeby coś dopisać.... To nie mam nic przeciwko;)
Z góry dzięki;)!
WHAT would you prefer to do in THE future: work for one company or work for several different companies?

In my future, ("ja" sie pisze duza litere) think that will prefer workING for several different companies. I want TO develop my career (move..nie wiem o co Ci chodzi) and I will search FOR A company which WILL offer me (przymiotnik tu potrzebny) career opportunities. I will research?? (o co tu chodzi?) new skills and suitable experience. A job in a office OR a "nine-to-five" job for me is boring. I WANT TO have a flextime in A rapidly growing company. I want to...[ frequent travel ..popracuj tu dalej] all over the world and meet new person?? (potr. l. mn.). When I achieve MY targets (albo goals) in one firm I will change companIES . However, when I have?? (kalka z polskiego) fifty years old, probably a??? (czy to ma byc "ja"??) will stay in one firm and I will wait for a pension.