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What would you do if a storm attacked you in the middle of a sea? Tony, Sid and Chris didn't have time to think about it.

It was a beautiful summer’s day. The sun was shining and it was very hot. Tony, Sid and Chris were on a sailing holiday in Spain. They were relaxing at sea and sun bathing.
Chris was standing on the deck of the boat. Suddenly he saw that black clouds were gathering. He told his friends about it. After a moment lighting flashed and the storm started. It was raining stronger and stronger. They understood they were in a great danger. They had never seen the storm before. The boat was rocking from side to side.

Friends were terrified, because they thought they would die on the sea. The thunder rolled across the sky and their mast burst into flames. They had a little hope that someone would rescue them. Tony radioed for help. The huge waves were crashing. They were in real danger. They knew that they should safe their lifes. They jumped into the life raft and saw how their boat was sinking slowly.

Tony, Sid and Chris were in the life raft for two days. They were very hungry. Suddenly they heard the sound of a boat. They were happy and relieved because they knew that were safe.

z góry dziękuję. ; ))
They had never seen 'the' A storm before.
THE friends were terrified, because they thought they would die on the
sea.
They had 'a' (tutaj uzycia tego 'a' jest bardzo ciekawe, wg mnie, niepotr- gdy w sensie o ktorym myslisz, tego nie uzywamy) little hope that someone would rescue them.
They knew that they should 'safe' (zle slowo) their 'lifes' (popatrz dokladnie na to slowo-popraw).

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