Krotkia historia -- prosze pomocy! bardzo pilne!

Hey!:D Mam ogromna prośbę! Moglby mi ktos sprawdzic ta historyjke?? Zalezy mi na czasie... a bede bardzo wdzieczna :*:*:*
Szczegolnie nie jestem pewna czasow...
Pozdrawiam wszystkich! :*:*

It was unforgetable day. It happened two month ago. I woke up at 8:00 and I was realizing that I was late for school! I began dress fast and then I was impacting about doors. I felt angry and I was running to bathroom very fast!
On luck I didn't have trail.
Eventually I was running from house. Unfortunately, It was raining. Later, when I went several meters, the car was splashing me!
Finally, dirty and wet I was arrivaling for school.
And then, turn out the school it is closed. I felt suprised and disoriented, so I decided return at home.
The door was opening my mum and she said: "What are you doing here?" After that turn out it was Sunday!

Troche bledow jest, wiec prosze o sprawdzenie i poprawienie:D
Z gory bardzooo dziekuje! :*

It was AN unforgetable day.
I woke up at 8:00 (tutaj musisz napisac czy .a.m. czy p.m. - bo nigdy nie wiadomo, - tutaj a.m.) and I 'was realizing' REALIZED that I was GOING TO BE late for school! I began TO dress 'fast' (nie, tutaj QUICKLY and then I 'was impacting' (tego nie rozumiem, napisz to po polsku) 'about' (zle slowo) doors. I felt angry and I 'was running' RAN to bathroom very fast!
'On luck' (nie, tutaj zrobilas kalke z jez. polskiego, na szczescie,. ale to nie tak piszemy - napisz...By some strange good luck) I didn't have A 'trail' (zle slowo tutaj -napisz to po polsku).
Eventually I 'was running' RAN from THE house.
Later, 'when' AFTER I went several 'meters' (ja lubie metres), 'the' A car 'was splashing' SPLASHED me!
Finally, dirty and wet I 'was 'arrivaling' (ortog)-ale zle)' ARRIVED 'for' (dla szkoly? - tutaj AT school.
And then, IT turnED out THAT the school 'it is' WAS closed. I felt suprised and
'disoriented' (ortog), so I decided TO return 'at' (to co napisalas 'at home' znaczy 'w domu' - ale tutaj nic nie potrzeba) home. The door was 'opening' OPENED BY my mum and she said: "What are you doing here?"
After that IT turnED out THAT it was A Sunday!