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The magazine, which I want to recommend to teenagers is "Newsweek". In my opinion, many young people may be interested in reading articles, which are published in this magazine.
"Newsweek" is one of the most famons american newspapers worldwicle. It is published regulary, every Monday. The magazine contcins a numerons number of articles, so this magazine may be a reliable source of informations. In addiction to articles about politics, there are also many articles about sport, economy, music or celebrities. Journalists and editors, who create "Newsweek", are the best experts and have an experience in writing essays. Due to this fact the quality of articles is hight and every of them are involving and worth reading. Moreover, the magazine affers us an enormous variety of additions such as: "Polish Universitie's Ranking" or "The Holiday Guide". In addition, the journal is avarible to buy in Elglish version. It is a great apportunity for everyone who want to learn English. The magazine is full of not only articles but also inbustrations and photos. They are as amazing as colourful. Last but not least, the paper, which are used to produce the journal are extremely smooth and shin- friendly.
In conclusion, I am totally convinced that "Newsweek" is well worth buying and reading. It contains everything, what a reader needs: superlo articles, proffesional photos the latest news and a lot of useful informations.

The magazine,(BEZ PRZECINKA) I WOULD LIKE to recommend to teenagers is
>"Newsweek". In my opinion, many young people may be interested in
>reading articles, which are published in this magazine.
> "Newsweek" is one of the most famoUs American newspapers
>worldwiDle. It is published regulary, every Monday. The magazine
>contAins a numerons (JAK NUMEROUS TO NIE NUMBER) number of articles, so this magazine may be a
>reliable source of informations (BES S). In addiction to articles about
>politics, there are also many articles about sport, economy, music or
>celebrities. Journalists and editors, (BEZ PRZECINKA) who create "Newsweek", (BEZ PRZECINKA) are the
>best experts and have an experience in writing essays. Due to this
>fact the quality of articles is high and EVERY ARTICLE IS ENGROSSING
>and worth reading. Moreover, the magazine Offers us an (BEZ AN) enormous
>variety of additions, such as: "Polish Universitie's Ranking" or "The
>Holiday Guide". MOREOVER, the journal is avaILABLE in Elglish
>version. It is a great Opportunity for everyone who want to learn
>English. The magazine is full of not only articles but also
>iLLUstrations and photos (JUZ BEZ PHOTOS). They are as amazing as colourful. Last but
>not least, the paper (BEZ WHICH I IS) used FOR PRODUCING the journal IS extremely smooth and sKin-friendly (ALE WYMYŚL TU COŚ LEPSZEGO, MIŁY DLA SKÓRY TO MOŻE BYĆ PAPIER TOALTETOWY LUB MLECZKO DOVE:).
> In conclusion, I am totally convinced that "Newsweek" journal is WORTH SPENDING TIME AND MONEY. It contains everything a reader WOULD LIKE TO FIND, from superlATIVE? articles, profesSional ILLUSTRATIONS, the latest news and a lot of useful informations (BEZ S - NIEPOLICZANLY).

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>>"Newsweek". In my opinion, many young people may be interested in
>>reading articles, which are published in this magazine.

The comma there isn't necessary there, is it?

>Moreover, the magazine Offers us an (BEZ AN) enormous variety of additions

And I would use the indefinite article there; secondary recategorization, Merix :)

I'm wondering what siunia thinks about this :)

great, now I have to play referee :)

>>"Newsweek". In my opinion, many young people may be interested in
>>reading articles, which are published in this magazine.

The comma there isn't necessary there, is it?
I agree, the comma is not necessary. Inserting the comma makes the "pause" seem unnatural

>Moreover, the magazine Offers us an (BEZ AN) enormous variety of additions
Here, I would use "an", but you can get away with NOT using it. Inserting "an" sounds more natural to me. What troubles me more in this sentence is the use of "additions". Is this BrE? Here, I would use "inserts" or "supplements".