pomocy

Napisłam cały opis i mam nadzieje, że ktoś mi to sprawdzi.. Mam kilka pytan:
1)Czy to co napisałam jest w miare uporzadkowane?
2) Ktos ma moze jakies propozycje zdan ktore lepiej polacza ten tekst w funkcjonalna calosc?
3) Jak to oceniacie?
There is no single definition of a magical city, but if I were to give one, it would certainly be a place with historic buildings and amazing atmosphere. It must have a distinct charakter of its own with its magical ability to just make you feel good.
For me it is only one city in Poland which comes true this definition. Cracow lies in the southern part of Poland on the Vistula River and it is one of the oldest city in Poland. This city has a long and interesting history. Cracow has many impressive sihgts to see for examples Wawel and Sukiennice. The Wawel is one of the best place to visit, there are a monuments a polish kings. Everyone who is interested in history will be satisfaction. The sight from Wawel is breathtaking.
All year Cracow is one of the most bustling places in Poland. Tourists can see a large number of quaint and attractive houses which have a medieval history. Cracow is city for everyone because a tourist offers is very variety. For teenager who want to have fun there are many clubs and cinemas. For older people are many art. gallerys, museums and cafes. Cracow is beauty and gorgeous place when feel good artists and musican. Cracow has also a awsome restaurants where are served a traditional delicious food. This city is a great cultural center, too; the University Jegielonsky is famous for all Europe Union.
Cracow has a unique atmosphere. Visitors from all the world talk that this city is magical. I agree with this opinion. I would like to live there when I end my study.

>>>>przedimki...co sie stalo?

There is no single definition of a magical city, but if I were to give
one, it would certainly be a place with historic buildings and
AN amazing atmosphere. 'It' (cos tu nie tak, bo jakos nie lacze 'magical city z tym() must have a distinct 'charakter' (ortog) of its own with its magical ability to just make you feel good.
For me it is THE only one city in Poland which comes true TO this definition.
Cracow lies in the southern part of Poland on the Vistula River and
it is one of the oldest 'city' CITIES in Poland.
Cracow has many impressive 'sihgts' (ortog) to see for 'examples' EXAMPLE Wawel and 'Sukiennice' (po ang). The Wawel is one of the best placeS to visit, there are 'a' monuments 'a' (tu cos brakuje) 'polish' (DUZA litera) kings. Everyone who is interested in history will be 'satisfaction' (zla czesc zdania).
Cracow is A city for everyone because 'a tourist offers' (co to? nie rozumiem)
'is very variety' (co to niby jest-napisz poprawnie). For A teenager who 'want' (dostosuj czasownik) to have fun there are many clubs and cinemas. For older people (tu cos brakuje) are many art 'gallerys' (ortog), museums and cafes. Cracow is A 'beauty' (popraw, zle slowo) and gorgeous place 'when feel good' (tego nie rozumiem) artists and 'musican' (tutaj l. mn). Cracow 'has also' (zla kol slwo) 'a' (dlaczego piszesz 'a' przed l. mnoga?) awsome restaurants where (ale kot?) are served a traditional delicious food. This city is a great cultural center, too; the 'University Jegielonsky' (popraw) is famous 'for all' (co to?) 'Europe' (popraw, poszukaj na internet jak to piszemy) Union.
Visitors from all the world 'talk' (zle slowo) that this city is magical.
I would like to live there when I 'end' (finish) my 'study' STUDIES.

15/20

Oj przepraszam za przedimki. Bardzo dziekuje ze sprawdziłas. Miałam szanse zobaczyc jak duzo bledow zrobiłma! Poprawiłam:
There is no single definition of a magical city, but if I were to give one, it would be certainly be a place with historic buildings and an amazing atmosphere. City from dreams should be absolutely incredible.
For me it is the only one city in Poland which comes true to this definition. Cracow lies in the southern part of Poland on the Vistula River and it is one of the oldest cities in Poland. Cracow has many impressive sights to see for ex ample Wawel and Sukiennice. The Wawel is one of the best places to vist, there are magnificent graves of Polish kings. Everyone who is interested in history will by satisfied.
Cracow has a variety tourist attractions. For a teenagers who want to have fun there are many clubs and cinemas. For older people who like calm are art. galleries, museums and cafes. Cracow is a beautiful and gorgeous place where feel good artists and musicians. When you are in the heartland of Cracow, you can recognize overpowering smell coming from restaurants. There are served a traditional delicious Polish food. The city is a great cultural center, too; the Jagiellonian University is well-known for everyone European.
Visitors from all the world say that this city is magical. Cracow is a city with rich traditions and history but it doesn’t mean that there are boringly. Everything make a wonderful atmosphere. I would like to live there when I finish my studies.
Jak myslisz czy w takiej formie moge to oddac?

nie przepraszaj, tylko naucz sie ich NA PAMIEC, bo jak teraz sobie nie radzisz, to ZAWSZE bedziesz miala problem.
A jak myslisz? jest lepiej?
Zauwazylam jeszcze te...popraw

A city from MY dreams should be absolutely incredible.
For me 'it' THERE is 'the' (niepotr) only one city in Poland which comes true to this definition.
...impressive sights to see for example Wawel and 'Sukiennice' (po ang The Cloth Hall). The Wawel is one of the best places to vist, there are magnificent graves of Polish kings THERE. Everyone who is interested in history will 'by' BE
satisfied.
Cracow has a variety OF tourist attractions. For 'a' (co to 'a' tutaj sie wkradlo?) teenagers who want to have fun there are many clubs and cinemas. For older people who like 'calm' (napisz lepiej 'culture') THERE are art(.) (nie rozumiem tego full stop tutaj) galleries, museums and cafes. Cracow is a beautiful and gorgeous place where 'feel good artists and musicians' (zla kol slow...artists and musicians get their inspiration). When you are in
the heartland of Cracow, you can recognize overpowering smellS coming
from THE restaurants. There are served 'a' (niepotr) traditional delicious Polish 'food' (napisz 'dishes'). The city is a great cultural center, too; the Jagiellonian University is well-known 'for' TO everyone IN THE European UNION.
Cracow is a city with rich traditions and history but it doesn't mean that 'there' IT IS 'are boringly' BORING. Everything makeS a wonderful atmosphere.