Wypracowanie o feriach zimowych

Moja koleżanka ma prace domowa napisac wypracowanie o feriach zimowych. Musi być ono napisane prostym językiem.


My winter Holidays
The first week I spent a winter holiday with my friend 'imie mojej kolezanki' and our friends in Warsaw. We went to the cinema, a park for walks, restaurants. One day, everyone sticking a huge snowman. We wanted to do igloo but we failed to. This week was memorable, I would like to take longer but unfortunately we had to go back to their homes.
The second week, and (unfortunately:)) the last winter holiday I spent at home. I was on swimming pool several times and went out with my friends quite often.

I niewiem jak napisac że.

W wolne dni pomagałam tacie w pracach podwrókowych, typu odśnieżanie.
Myślę że moje ferie zimowe były bardzo udane. W czasie ich trwania nie nudziłam się, tylko spędziłam czas na zabawie i relaksie. Może za rok będzie jeszcze lepiej?


A tu po polsku moj tekst z góry.
Pierwszy tydzień ferii zimowych spędziłam w warszawie z moją przyjaciółką "imie koleżanki' i naszymi znajomymi . Chodziliśmy do kina, do parku na spacery, restauracji. Jednego dnia ulepiliśmy ogromnego bałwana. Chcieliśmy zrobić iglo ale nam nie wyszło. Ten tydzień był niezapomniany, chciałam żeby trwał dłużej, ale niestety musiałyśmy wracać do domów.
Drugi tydzień i ( niestety :) ) ostatni ferii zimowych spędziłam w domu. Byłam pare razy na basenie i dośc często spotykałam się ze znajomymi.

My winter Holidays
>The first week (OF czego? napisz to tutaj) I spent 'a winter holiday' (zle miejsce) with my friend 'imie mojej kolezanki' and our friends in Warsaw. We went to the cinema, a park for walks(,) and TO restaurants. One day, everyone 'sticking' (zle slowo-poszuja inne) a huge snowman. We wanted to 'do' MAKE igloo but we failed. 'to'(niepotr).
I would like to take longer, but unfortunately we had to go back to 'their' (ich domow?) homes.
The second week, and unfortunately the last OF MY winter holiday I spent
at home. I 'was on' (kalka na kalce z polskiego, napisz to wg ang gramatyki) swimming pool several times and went out with my friends quite often.

My winter Holidays
The first week a winter holiday I spent with my friend 'imie mojej kolezanki' and our friends in Warsaw. We went to the cinema, a park for walks and to restaurants. One day, everyone ‘make?’ a huge snowman. We wanted to make igloo but we failed. This week was memorable, I would like to take longer but unfortunately we had to go back to our homes.
The second week, and (unfortunately:)) the last of my winter holiday I spent at home. I was swimming pool several times and went out with my friends quite often.


Tak jest poprawnie?

NIE.
The first week OF MY 'a'(niepotr) winter holiday I spent with my friend 'imie mojej kolezanki' and our friends in Warsaw.
One day, everyone 'make?' BUILT a huge snowman. We wanted to make AN igloo but we failed.
The second week, and unfortunately, (zostaw to 'unfortunately, w zdaniu, to jest dobrze) the last of my winter holiday I spent at home. I 'was' SWAM IN THE swimming pool several times and went out with my friends quite often.

My winter Holidays
The first week of my winter holiday I spent with my friend 'imie mojej kolezanki' and our friends in Warsaw. We went to the cinema, a park for walks and to restaurants. One day, everyone built a huge snowman. We wanted to make an igloo but we failed. This week was memorable, I would like to take longer but unfortunately we had to go back to our homes.
The second week, and unfortunately the last of my winter holiday I spent at home. I swam in the swimming pool several times and went out with my friends quite often.

W wolne dni pomagałam tacie w pracach podwrókowych, typu odśnieżanie.
I think my winter holidays were very successful.
W czasie ich trwania nie nudziłam się, tylko spędziłam czas na zabawie i relaksie.
Maybe the year will be even better?

Nie wiem jak przetłumaczyć dwa zdania.

W wolne dni pomagałam tacie w pracach podwrókowych, typu odśnieżanie.
..In my free time....reszte ty daj...
W czasie ich trwania nie nudziłam się, tylko spędziłam czas na
zabawie i relaksie.
...During my holidays, I...

My winter Holidays
The first week of my winter holiday I spent with my friend 'imie mojej kolezanki' and our friends in Warsaw. We went to the cinema, a park for walks and to restaurants. One day, everyone built a huge snowman. We wanted to make an igloo but we failed. This week was memorable, I would like to take longer but unfortunately we had to go back to our homes.
The second week, and unfortunately the last of my winter holiday I spent at home. I swam in the swimming pool several times and went out with my friends quite often. In my free time I helped my dad in the work … ( I RESZTY NA SERIO NIE WIEM JAK POWIEDZIEĆ. ) I think my winter holidays were very successful. During my winter holidays I am not bored but spent time on the play and relax. Maybe the year will be even better?