bardz proszę o sprawdze nie listu ;)

bardzo prosze o pomoc przy sprawdzeniu listu ;) bede bardzo wdzieczna ! pozdrawiam
Anglojęzyczne czasopismo przyrodnicze poprosiło czytelników o przysłanie listów na temat problemów związanych z ochrona środowiska, z jakimi stykają się na co dzień. Napisz list i
- poinformuj z jakiego jesteś kraju i dlaczego piszesz
- podaj co najmniej dwa rażące przykłady niszczenia środowiska,
- zaproponuj sposoby, przy pomocy których można temu zaradzić,
- podziękuj za możliwość wyrażenia swoich obaw i wyraź nadzieję na opublikowanie listu.

Dear Editor,

I Am writing to you because I have just read your article in periodical ‘TIME’. I am very interested in it because it is important subject for me.
My name is Ewelina and I am from Poland. In my opinion we should make our place environmentally friendly, as it really depends on us. I think everyone should try to protect the environment. First of the example destroying the environment is burning the forests, second example is hunting the animals and moreover polluting the nature, like throwing out the litter to the rivers or contaminating the air because of the exhaust. I think the society can have influence on our natural environment, first of all we can buy only ecologically safe products made from biodegradable or recycled materials. Another way is returning cans and bottles to a store or putting them to a recycling center. What is more we can use catalysts of the exhaust. Thank you very much that I could express my apprehension and I hope you will publish my letter soon.

pomocy ;/

A co sie stalo z przedimkami, a, an, the?

I Am writing to you because I have just read your article in THE
periodical 'TIME'. I am very interested in it because it is AN important
subject for me.
First 'of the' (niepotr) example OF destroying the environment is burning the forests, second example is hunting the animals and moreover polluting 'the' (niepotr) nature, like throwing out 'the' (niepotr) litter to the rivers or contaminating the air because of the exhaust FUMES.
What is more we can use 'catalysts' (tu l. poj) 'of the' (niepotr) exhaustS.

'Thank you very much that I could' (napisza to inaczej...I thank you for the opportunity to), express my apprehension and I hope you will publish my letter soon.

triszke malo tego mam ,,,moze cos doradzicie aby dopisac do tego listu ....

I am writing to you because I have just read your article in the
periodical 'TIME'. I am very interested in it because it is an important
subject for me.
First example OF destroying the environment is burning the forests, second example is hunting the animals and moreover polluting nature, like throwing out litter to the rivers or contaminating the air because of the exhaust FUMES.
What is more we can use catalyst exhaustS.
I thank you for the opportunity to express my apprehension and I hope you will publish my letter soon.