the holiday of a lifetime

hej. mam wielką prośbę do Was. właśnie jestem w trakcie pisania opowiadania. jego temat, to 'the holiday of a lifetime'. nie jest ono dokończone, bo jeszcze piszę, ale czy mógłby mi ktoś sprawdzić to, co narazie mam, bo boję się, że później może już nikogo nie być. mam duże problemy z czasami przeszłymi, co z resztą pewnie będzie widać
bardzo proszę Was o pomoc.

Last summer, my old class decided to spend their holidays in Italy. I thought - tjis idea is so great! - and I was enroll to this trip.
At the beginning I had biggish problem - the list on the travel was shut and I was in the waiting list. However in the end I got do to this list. I was very happy. In the last day after the travel I packed up and in the next day I was ready to this trip. We set out in June.
The trip was been very long and tiresome but when we're approached be was fanstastic! the weather be was amanzing. I love the sun and hot climate whom there was been.
In the Italy we was had very much activity. In the day we want sighted Italy only day, in the evening we came back to the camp.

bardzo proszę o pomoc :)

I thought - 'tjis' (ortog) idea is so great! - and I 'was' (niepotr, bo nastepne slowo daje nam znac co zrobiles w czasie przeszlym) 'enroll' (tu czas przeszly) 'to' ON this trip.
At the beginning I had (tu cos brakuje) 'biggish' (nie najlepsze slowo) problem - the list 'on' FOR the travel was 'shut' (dobre pojecie, ale inne slowo) and I was 'in' ON the waiting list. However in the end I got 'do to' (nie rozumiem tego) this list.
'In' AT the last day 'after' (after znaczy 'po'?) the travel I packed
up and 'in' (niepotr) the next day I was ready 'to' FOR this trip.
The trip 'was been' (pomysl o tym- i popraw) very long and tiresome but when we're approached (ale co? trzeba napisac) 'be' (nie rozumiem dlaczego to uzyles tutaj) IT was 'fanstastic' (ortog)! the weather 'be' (niepotr, dlaczego to uzywasz?) was 'amanzing' (ortog). I love the sun and hot climate 'whom there was been' (tego nie moge rozszyfrowac).
In 'the' (niepotr) Italy 'we was' (dlaczego 'was' z 'we' jedno to l. poj a drugie to l. mnoga, ale i tak 'was' jest niepotr) had very much activity. In the day we 'want' (want-to jest 'chciec' cos tu nie tak) 'sighted' (zle slowo, tutaj SIGHTSEEING Italy 'only day' (nie rozumiem), AND in the evening we came back to the camp.

dziękuję Ci baaardzo za pomoc ! :)

czy teraz jest dobrze?

Last summer, my old class decided to spend their holidays in Italy. I thought - this idea is so great! - and I enrolled on this trip.

At the beginning I had a big problem - the list for the travel was closed and I was on the waiting list. However in the end I got to this list. I was very happy. At the last day before the travel I packed up and the next day I was ready for this trip. We set out in June.

The trip was very long and tiresome but when we're approached it was fantastic! the weather was amazing. I love the sun and hot climate whom was in Italy.

In Italy we were having very much activity. In the day we were sightseeing Italy only day and in the evening we came back to the camp.

However in the end I got (tu brakuje ...a place...(miejsce) 'to' ON this
list. I was very happy. 'At' ON the last day before the travel I packed up
(my things) and the next day I was ready for this trip.

The trip was very long and tiresome but when 'we're' (tutaj napisales WE ARE- co jest zle, potrzeba WE) approached (ale co-nie napisales!) it was fantastic! I love the sun and hot climate 'whom' (to piszemy jak piszemy o ludziach, a tutaj mowisz o miejscu WHICH was in Italy.
In Italy we were having 'very much' (napisz to inaczej...A LOT OF) activity. 'In' DURING the day we were sightseeing Italy 'only day' (tego teraz nie potrzeba, bo masz juz napisane, ze to bylo 'w ciagu dnia') and in the evening we came back to the camp.