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Malbork is a place where is an ancient castel. This villiage lifes in the shadow of the Teutonic fortress. About half of million turists arrives here every year. Did you be there? If you not, you have to know something about Malbork.

In 1274 Knights of the Cross begun build a castel. Soon it became one of the most powerfull devensive buildings. Today it’s a museum. There is still a lot of to see. The museum include: medium castel and tall castel.

Medium castel have three wings closed low wall and Great Master’s Palace. This is extraodinary place. Chambers are decorate with many gotic details and there are also motif in vegetable. In front of long woodem gotway is walking knight and you can take a photo with him.

Tall castle have four wings, but is smaller than medium castel. Building is surrended by double walls. It’s very impressive. There is church on the north of wing.

In the vicinity of Malbork’s castel there are Great Master’s garden. Walking across the garden you can see Romains of a chapel.
Every year be held show ‘Cross and sword- light and sound on the castle in Malbork. It shows history of Wars between Poles and Knights of the Cross.

I think, now you know, why Malbork is special place, which you should visit. Here you can spend actively full of day. Malbork’s castle have long history, which you have to know at all.

>Malbork is a place {with an ancient castle as its distinctive landmark}. This villiage {lies} in
>the shadow of the Teutonic fortress. About half {a} million {tourists}
>arrives here every year. {Have you ever been here}? If {} not, you {should get to know} something about Malbork {then}.
>
> In 1274, {the Teutonic Knights} begun {building} a {castle}. Soon, it became
>one of the most {powerful defensive} buildings. Today, it's a museum.
>There is still a lot {} to see. The museum {includes}: {the} medium {castle} and
>tall {castle}.
>
> {The} medium {castle has} three wings, {a} closed low wall and {the} Great
>Master's Palace. This is {an extraordinary} place. {The} chambers are {decorated}
>with many {Gothic} details and there are also ??motif in vegetable??. In
>front of {the} long {wooden entrance, there} is {a} walking knight and you can take a photo
>with him.
>
> {The} tall {castle has} four wings, but is smaller than {the} medium {castle}.
>{The} building is {surrounded} by double walls. It's very impressive. There is
>{a} church {in the north} wing.
>
> In the vicinity of {Malbork castle,} there {is the} Great Master's
>garden. Walking across the garden, you can see {remains} of a chapel.
>Every year, {a} show {called} 'Cross and Sword' {is held} - lights and sound {are displayed} on the
>castle in Malbork. It {presents the} history of {wars} between Poles and {the Teutonic} Knights.
>
> I think {that} now you know why Malbork is {a} special place, which you
>should visit. Here you can spend {your day in an active way. Malbork}
>castle {has a} long history which you {should learn about}.

history of {wars} between
>Poles and {the Teutonic} Knights
powinno byc 'the Poles'

male poprawki:

half a million tourists arrive (l. mn) here every year.

In 1274, the Teutonic Knights building a castle.
begun = past participle
powino byc BEGAN

Walking across the garden, you can see THE remains of a chapel.

I think that now you know why Malbork is a special place, [and that it is (a place) worth visiting].

no tak, masz racje

thank you :):)