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Last autumn I met somebody who impressed me(wywarł na mnie wrażenie?) and it was very possitive effect. Next time I was meeting him las weekend on the concert in the local club. He is the musician and his stage name is ET Tumason, but his real name is Ellidi. ET comes from Iceland. As far as I can see ET is 27 years old and two years ago was recorded his first CD. Music which he sings and plays the guitar is termined as blues. I and my friends have been spending with ET all night and we wait when he visits Polnad again.

Icelander is tall man, about 180, skinny and pale-skinned. His hair is long, straight and brown(jasnobrązowe?). Sometimes he grows a moustache, bread and... sideburns. Usually he wears t-shirt, trousers, sweater and sneakers(trampki?).
I think he look little scruffy.

When I saw ET first time, I didn't know that he is so witty, amusing and lovably. Then I started find him quick-thinking person because, for instance, he very quickly learns polish words and pharses and he says many jokes. Being so affably, comunicative and thanks to that he assimilates into environment with facility people like him and they want to know him closer. Otherwise ET can enjoy yourself and other people have a great fun spending time with him.
More time ET spends playing the guitar, writing song and giving concerts. So far I don't know any disadvantages of ET.;)

I'm really glad that I had a chance to know somebody like ET. I wish I could see more of him and hear him music which is so extremaly.

Last autumn I met somebody who impressed me(wywarł na mnie wrażenie?)
and it was A very possitive effect. Next time I 'was meeting' (dlaczego uzywasz contin. kiedy simple jest potrzebny)MET him 'las' (ortog) weekend 'on' (kalka z polskiego, prosze poprawic) 'the' (prosze dac odpowiedni) concert in the local club.
As far as I can see ET is 27 years old and two years ago 'was' (calkowicie nie rozumiem yuzycia tego slowa tutaj) recorded his first CD. (tu cos brakuje) Music which he sings and plays (tu cos brakuje) the guitar is 'termined' (zle slowo-popraw) 'as' (niepotr) blues. I and my friends 'have been spending' SPENT with ET all night and we wait when he visits 'Polnad' (ortog) again.

(tu cos brakuje) Icelander is (tu cos brakuje) tall man, about 180 (czedgo ? inches?), skinny and pale-skinned. His hair is long, straight and brown(jasnobrązowe?-light brown). Sometimes he grows a moustache, 'bread' (to co napisales to 'chleb'-popraw) and... sideburns. Usually he wears (tu cos brakuje)t-shirt, trousers, sweater and sneakers.
I think 'he look' (prosze dostosowac czasownik do rzedczownika) (tu cos brakuje) little scruffy.

When I saw ET (tu cos brakuje) first time, I didn't know that he is so witty, amusing and 'lovably' (zla czesc zdania). Then I started (tu cos braskuje) find him (tu cos brakuje) quick-thinking person because, for instance, he very quickly 'learns' (tutaj czas przeszly) Polish (duza litera) words and 'pharses' (ortog) and he 'says' (zle slowo, tutaj TELLS) many jokes. Being so 'affably' (zla czesc zdania), comunicative 'and thanks to that' (niepotr) he assimilates into (tu cos brakuje) environment with 'facility' (zle slowo) people like him and they want to know him 'closer' (nie, napisz BETTER). Otherwise ET can enjoy 'yourself' (nie, tutaj mowisz o 'him' to HIMSELF) and other people have 'a' (niepotr) great fun spending time with him.

More time ET spends playing the guitar, writing song and giving
concerts......To niestety nie jest zdaniem...
So far I don't know any 'disadvantages' (nie najtrafniejsze slowo) of ET.;)

I wish I could see more of him and hear 'him' (zle slowo, tutaj HIS-jego) music which is so 'extremaly' (ortog) (tu brakuje reszty zdania...)

Prosze jeszcze raz przeczytaj sobie dokladnie o przedimkach, 'the', 'a', 'an', bo robisz bledy. Musisz to pojac, bo do konca zycia bedziesz robil te same bledy. Innych rzeczy sie dobrze nauczysz, ale przedimki beda Ci sprawialy klopot.

Last autumn I met somebody who impressed me and it was A very possitive effect. Next time I met him last weekend to a concert in the local club.
As far as I can see ET is 27 years old and two years ago recorded his first CD. The Music which he sings and plays
(tu coś brakuje-o ile wiem grać na gitarze-play the guitar)the guitar is defined blues. I and my friends spent with ET all night and we wait when he visits Poland again.

An Icelander is a tall man, about 180 centimeters, skinny and pale-skinned. His hair is long, straight and light brown. Sometimes he grows a moustache, beard and... sideburns. Usually he wears a t-shirt, trousers, a sweater and sneakers.
I think he looks a little scruffy.

When I saw ET the first time, I didn't know that he is so witty, amusing and friendly. Then I started to find him as quick-thinking person because, for instance, he very quickly learnt Polish words and phrases and he tells many jokes. Being so affable, comunicative he assimilates into an environment easily and people like him and they want to know him better. Otherwise ET can enjoy himself and other people have great fun spending time with him.

ET spends much time playing the guitar, writing song and giving
concerts.(??)So far I don't know any flaws of ET.;)

I wish I could see more of him and hear his music which is so extremely marvellous.


a teraz? bardzo dziekuje za pomoc.

pffu... 'at the concert'*

DALEJ NIE-

Last autumn I met somebody who impressed me and it was A very 'possitive' (ortog) effect. Next time I met him last weekend 'to' AT a concert in the local club.
The Music which he sings and plays (tu coś brakuje-o ile wiem grać na gitarze-play the guitar-TAK, ale zdanie z tym niema sensu - zrob to jeszcze raz, i nie pisz mi co wiesz a co nie, tylko rob to wg ang., gramatyki) the guitar
is defined (tu cos brakuje) (blues. I and my friends spent 'with ET all night' (zla kol slow..all night with..) and we wait when he visits Poland again.
'An' (o kim tutaj mowisz, o jakims nieznajomych obcym Ci czlowieku, czy o kims konkretnym) Icelander is a tall man, about 180 centimeters IN HEIGHT, skinny and pale-skinned.
When I saw ET (tu cos brakuje) the first time, I didn't know that he 'is' (napisz...would be) so witty, amusing and friendly. Then I started to find him 'as' (zle slowo) quick-thinking person because, for instance, he very quickly learnt Polish words and phrases and he tells many jokes.

ET spends much time playing the guitar, writing 'song' (tu ma byc l. mnoga) and giving concerts.
..know any of his flaws..

Last autumn I met somebody who impressed me and it was A very positive effect. Next time I met him last weekend at a concert in the local club.
The Music which he sings and plays on the guitar
is defined as blues. I and my friends spent all night with ET and we wait when he visits Poland again.
The Icelander is a tall man, about 180 centimeters in height, skinny and pale-skinned.
When I saw ET for the first time, I didn't know that he would be so witty, amusing and friendly. Then I started to find him a quick-thinking person because, for instance, he very quickly learnt Polish words and phrases and he tells many jokes.