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Since half of nineteenth century mobile phones have been available for everyone. Nowadays most of people use them and appreciate a big amount of advantages of this gadgets. But the rest of society doesn't need cell phones and thinks, that there are no positive aspects of having them. What are arguments for and against mobile phones?
The most important advantage of cell phones is opportunity in communication with other people in every part of the globe. For example, when I need to talk with my best friend or my mom to ask for advice, I can phone to them. Many people think that possession of mobile guarantee sense of security. If you have an accident, you will be able to take your mobile phone and make an emergency call. Finally, we live in busy world and we have to follow it. We can do this with our mobiles because they include calendar, calculator and camera.
On the other hand, using cell phones is quite expensive. Especially when we talk a lot, bills can scare us. Moreover, sometimes we forget about personal contact with others, because we prefer communication by mobile phone. Another disadvantage is connected with our health. A lot of teenagers are obsessive about sending text messages. It could be very dangerous for them.
In conclusion, modern gadgets have many positive aspects, but also we have to realize that using of mobile phones has negative effects. In my opinion, cell phones improve the quantity of our life, but only when it used sensibly.