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Hi Stephanie,
Thanks for your eamil.It was good to hear from you again.
You want to know something about Ania,so I short describe her.
She's 19 and she's studying economy at university in my town. Ania has older brother and youger sister. Her mother is teacher and father is judge.
She is very nice person. I think that she's sociable and very frendly.She always has a lots of friends. She's hlepful and responsible that you can always count on her when you have a problem.You don't worry about mess, Ania is really tidy person. When I visited to her she always has clean room.
She has a lots of hobbies for egzmple: collect stamps or painting. But I think that her biggest hobby is music. She likes write and compose new songs and she has beautyfull vioice.
Unfortunately Ania is very talkative person. She always has something to say. Sometimes she wolud be nervous but she can master emotions
That's all whatI can telll you about her.
I hope that's useful
All the best,
xyz

Hi Stephanie,
Thanks for your eamil (orto).It was good to hear from you again.
You wantED to know something about Ania,so I'LL PROVIDE A short [describe..zmien na rzeczownik] OF her.
She's 19 and she's studying economICS at (brakuje przedimka> university in my town. Ania has AN older brother and youger(orto) sister. Her mother is [brakuje przedimka] teacher and HER father is [brakuje przedimka]judge.
She is {brakuje przdimka] very nice person. I think that she's sociable and very frendly (orto).She always has a lot of friends. She's helpful and responsible AND you can always count on her when you have a problem.You don't HAVE TO worry about A messBECAUSE Ania is [brakuje przedima]really tidy person. When I visited her she always haD [brakuje przedima]clean room.
She has lots of hobbies for egzmple (orto): collectING stamps or painting. But I think that her biggest hobby is music. She likes TO write and compose new songs and she has beautyfull (orto) voice.
Unfortunately, Ania is [brakuje przedima]very talkative person. She always has something to say. Sometimes she nervous but she can master (czyje?)emotions
That's all ThatI can tell you about her

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