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Last night when I was on my way home something frightening happened. I stopped on the red light. I was listening to the music when some masked man opened the back door of my car and start to screaming. I didn’t understood him. I was very scared. I thought he whant to rob me and kill me! After a while I recognize it was my friend and it was only a silly joke. I gave him a lift to home.

Ponawiam prosbe :) to na jutro :) bede wdzieczna!!

Last night when I was on my way home, something (rather)frightening happened. I stopped (my scooter? car? bike?) AT the red light. I was listening to music when some (wole "a" tutaj) masked man opened the back door of my car and start [to screaming...popraw]. I didn't understood (zla forma) him. I was very scared. I thought he whant (orto) to rob me and kill me! After a while, I recognizeD THAT it was my friend and it was only a silly joke. I gave him a lift home.

czy terez jest poprawnie?

Last night when I was on my way home, something frightening happened. I stopped my car at the red light. I was listening to music when a masked man opened the back door of my car and started to screaming. I didn't understand him. I was very scared. I thought he want to rob me and kill me! After a while, I recognized that it was my friend and it was only a silly joke. I gave him a lift home.

Last night when I was on my way home, something frightening happened. I stopped my car at the red light. I was listening to music when a masked man opened the back door of my car and started [to screaming..dalej zle]. I didn't understand him. I was very scared. I thought he wantED to rob me and kill me! After a while, I recognized that it was my friend and it was only a silly joke. I gave him a lift home.

to scream?

nie, pomysl dokladnie o tym...

started screaming

dobrze

Dziekuje slicznie! :)