Sprawdzenie zdań i opisu dnia present simple

Witam!Bardzo proszę o sprawdzenie zdań a także opisu dnia w 10 zdaniach w Present Simple.

Opis dnia
I usually get up 7 a.m. I make breakfast for me and my children.
Then I wake up girls and wear them. We eat on breakfast on cornflakes with milk.At 8 a.m. we go to the Nursey School.I leave children and come back home.
Coming back I do in shop purchases,like milk,fruits,bread and meat.At home I cook dinner ,wash and clean.On3 pm children come back from nursey school and husband from work.we eat dinner. after the dinner we play with kids.at 7.30 pm i wash my children, take a shower and i put to sleep them/girls.i spend with husband time. at 10 pm i go sleep.

I zdania czy są poprawnie przetłumaczone
Z góry wszytskim bardzo dziękuje !!!
Buty są pod krzesłem - The shoes are under chair
Autobus jest czerwony - The bus is red
Gry komputerowe są drogie - The computer games are expensive
On potrafi naprawiać zegarki - He is able to repair watches
Kobiety nie lubią myszy - womens don`t like the mouses
Gdzie są moje buty - where are my shoes?
Jest zimno i wietrzenie - it is coldy and windy
Jem śniadanie w domu - i eat breakfast at home
W tej chwili słucham muzyki -i am listening music at the moment
Mężczyzna na przystanku czyta gazetę - the man on bus station is reading newspaper

>I usually get up {at} 7 a.m. I make breakfast for {} my children {and myself}.
>Then I wake up {the} girls and {get} them {dressed}. We {have} cornflakes
>with milk {for breakfast}. At 8 a.m. we go to the {nursey school}. I leave children and
>come back home.
>{On my way} back, I do {some shopping} like milk, fruits, bread and meat. At
>home I cook dinner, wash {up} and clean. {At} 3 p.m. {the} children come back from
>{the} nursey school and {my} husband from work. We eat dinner. After {} dinner we
>play with kids. At 7.30 p.m. I wash my children, take a shower and I put {the girls}
>to {bed}. I spend {my free time} with {my} husband. At 10 p.m. I go sleep.

>Buty są pod krzesłem - The shoes are under {the} chair.
>Autobus jest czerwony - The bus is red. OK
>Gry komputerowe są drogie - {} Computer games are expensive.
>On potrafi naprawiać zegarki - He is able to repair watches. OK
>Kobiety nie lubią myszy - {Women} don`t like {mice}.
>Gdzie są moje buty - Where are my shoes? OK
>Jest zimno i wietrzenie - It is {cold} and windy.
>Jem śniadanie w domu - I eat breakfast at home. OK
>W tej chwili słucham muzyki - I am listening {to} music at the moment.
>Mężczyzna na przystanku czyta gazetę - The man {at the} bus {stop} is
>reading {a} newspaper.

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