czy te zdania są poprawnie napisane??

1. I am writing to enquire about Luxury Holiday Apartments that you offer.

2. I would be grateful if you could me some detailed information about your offer.

3. I am planning an activity holiday in the France.

4. Could you please tell me whether your Apartment has swimming pool?

5. Have you cooking facilities? And I wolud be interested the full price in August.

6. I wolud be grateful if you could also let me know where is the Apartment? Is Apartment in the South France?

byłabym wdzięczna za możliwie szybkie sprawdzenie...

możecie sprawdzić?

1. ok
2.I would be grateful if you could ( tutaj brakuje czasownika, może 'send' albo coś takiego)me some detailed information about
>your offer.
3. in France without 'the'
4. Could you tell me whether your Apartment has a swimming pool, please?
5. Are there cooking facilities in your apartments? "And I wolud be interested the full price in August"- nie wiem co tutaj autor miał na myśli...
6. I wolud be grateful if you let me know where the
>Apartment is ? Is the Apartment in the South of France?

W ramach uzupełnienia:
- nie przerabiaj apartments na apartment
- jeśli skleisz to w list, to w 6. zdaniu zamień drugie apartment na odpowiedni zaimek

w 5, niezależnie od intencji autora, interested in:)

4. Could you tell me whether your Apartment has a swimming pool,
>please? myśli.. chodziło mi o cenę w miesiącu sierpniu może : 400 per week this is same price in aUGUST?

Zaimek zamiast Apartment? a moze być: it?

Nawet musi - inny zaimek tu nie pasuje:)

no ok dzięki, ale jeszcze nie jestem pewna tego jednego zdania z tą kwotą za miesiąc sierpień....:)

1. I am writing to enquire about THE Luxury Holiday Apartments that you offer.

4. Could you PLEASE tell me whether your/albo THE apartment (pisz mala litera) COMPLEX has a swimming pool? [please...gramatycznie jest ok, ale wole wstawic po "you"]

5. What is the price per week in August (for renting an apartment)? [nie potr. "full price"]

6. Where are/is the [apartments/apartment complex] located? ARE the apartmentS (pisz mala litera) in the South of France?


Nie rozumiem czemu piszesz takim "uprzejmym" tonem. Are you asking for a favour?

"I would be grateful..."
"Could you please tell me..."
"I would be interested..."

It would be fine to include a "courteous" sentence in your first/last paragraph, but other than that, it is unneccessary. Ask your questions more directly.

no ok, mozliwe ze przesadziłam, dziekuje za spr.