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Dear Sir or Madam ,

I am writing to complain about the TV set LG 299H that I bought from RTV SHOP in London on 1st March 2010. The TV set is advertised as the best .

The problems with the TV set began after I bought it home and took it out of the box. It had big scratch on the screen .
Another and perhaps more alarming problem is that when press the button televison don not want turn on ,but after 7 minutes when it turn on I can see a picture it is black and white. Sound does not work too. Instruction is not complete so I cannot stabilize the colour. I tried different ways to make it operational, but it is not possible.


I am returning the TV set together with the receipt to you with this letter. I would be grateful if you could repair the fault. If this is not possible could you please send me a new one?

I look forward to hearing from you .

Yours faithfully ,
XYZ


nie jestem pewna co do tego zdania : Another and perhaps more alarming problem is that when press the button televison don not want turn on ,but after 7 minutes when it turn on I can see a picture it is black and white. jest poprawne ?

z góry bardzo dziękuję :)
I am writing to complain about the 'TV set LG 299H' (zla kol slow, najpierw model a wtedy co, tutaj LG299H TV set) that I bought from (przedimek) RTV SHOP in London on (tu cos brakuje) 1st March 2010.

The problems with the TV set began after I 'bought' (zle slowo, tutaj myslisz o 'przynioslam' a nie 'kupilam' - popraw) it home and took it out of the box. It had (tu cos brakuje) big scratch on the screen .
Another and perhaps more alarming problem is that when (tu brakuje Kto? co?)press the button (tu cos brakuje) televison 'don not' (po pierwsze to jest kolokw a po drugie zle-..najpierw TV to totuaj 3os.l.poj-dostosuj czasownik do tgo) want (tu cos brakuje) turn (tu cos brakuje) on ,but after 7 minutes when it
(tu cos brakuje) 'turn' (tutaj czas przeszly) on I can see a picture, (daj tutaj BUT) it is black and white. (tu cos brakuje) Sound does not work too. (tu cos brakuje) Instruction is not complete, so I cannot stabilize the
colour.

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