moje dwie ulubione rzeczy- proszę o sprawdzenie

My first favourite thing is my mobile phone. It look quite nice. It has got ping housing and green buttons. It has got quite big display. I useing my mobile phone every day. Often I sending sms to my friends and I calling to my parents. Sometimes I useing my mobile phone to making a fotos and short, funny films. I have my mobile phone since one year. This thing is second hand. I bought my mobile phone of my friend Tom. I think that my mobile phone is very important thing because I can useing it to comunication witch everybody and everywhere.
My second favourite thing is my diary. It has got green cover who is made witch soft material. I useing my diary to note important ocasions, for example birthday of my friends or my tasks on my all week. Ihave my diary since my birthday. I got it for my mum because she said that I'm not organized and I forget a lots of my duties. I think that my diary is very important thing because I can note and remember all important occasion.

Nie wklejaj tego samego tekstu co chwile, bo to mnie naprawde wku....

It 'look' (czy nikt Cie nie uczyl o rzecz w 3os.l.poj i w jaki sposob wtedy piszemy czasowniki? - popraw) quite nice. It has got 'ping' (ourtog) housing and green buttons. It has got quite (tu cos brakuje) big display.
I 'useing' (ortog ale i tak zle slowo) my mobile phone every day. Often I 'sending' (dlaczego robisz to w czasie cont - tutaj simple) 'sms' (w ang texts) to my friends and I 'calling' (popraw) to my parents. Sometimes I 'useing' (znowu ta sama ortog-popraw) my mobile phone to
'making' (you do not MAKE a photo, you TAKE a photo) 'a' (dlaczego dajesz 'a' jak masz rzecz w l. mnnogiej?) fotos and short, funny films. I have (tu cos brakuje) my mobile phone 'since' (zle slowo-popraw) one year.
I bought my mobile phone 'of' FROM my friend Tom. I think that my mobile phone is very important thing because I can 'useing' (nie rozumiem dlaczego 3 razy piszesz to slowo blednie) it to 'comunication' (zla czesc mowy) 'witch' (zle slowo-popraw) everybody and everywhere.
It has got (tu cos brakuje) green cover 'who' WHICH is made 'witch' (co masz z tymi czarownicami?) soft material. I 'useing' (naucz sie tego slowa pisac poprawnie) my diary to note important 'ocasions' (ortog), for example (tu cos brakuje) 'birthday' (ale to ma sie zgadzac z l. mn friends) of my friends or my tasks 'on' (kalka z polskiego - popraw) my all week. Ihave (tu cos brakuje) my diary since my birthday. I got it 'for' (dla mojej mamy - cos tu nie tak) my mum because she said that I'm not organized and I forget 'a' (niepotr) lots of my duties. I think that my diary is very important thing because I can note and
remember all important 'occasion' (ortog ale 'all daje mi znac, ze cos bedzie w l. mn. - popraw).

Kobietko jeżeli sprawdzanie mojej pracy było dla Ciebie katorką to wcale nie musiałaś tego robić. Z góry dziękuję za Twój niezwykły wysiłek. A co do określenia "kaleka z polskiego" to jestem na trzecim roku polonistyki. Każdy ma swój fach i na przyszłość zachowaj takie epitety dla siebie :) Pozdrowionka dla Ciebie.

"kaleka z polskiego"

kalka z polskiego

Nie obawiaj sie. Wiecej nigdy juz nie sprqwdze twojego tekstu.
Poczekamy na innych, ktorzy maja wiecej cierpliwosci ode mnie i daje im to niezwykla przyjemnosc sprawdzac teksty prosto z translatora.
Dla mnie, to wstyd byloby sie przyznac, ze juz studiujesz.
No, ale Ty to chyba masz sie czym chwalic.
Koniec tematu.

przyłączam się z prośba o sprawdzenie. tekst o tym czy grafiti uważasz za sztukę czy za wandalizm
Graffiti is art as well as vandalism. I think graffiti is art when used in the “right” way . Graffiti artist take a lot of time and perfection in their work just as if a writer does in their books. Its way of expressing ouselfs and how we see this crappy world we live in. were just trying to make it a more beautiful place to live in instead of a dump! Its not just for some to state their name but its some to express what they feel and it’s a free wright of speech. For example IM KING OF FWC=freedom writers crew and we paint to releasestrees and to show how we feel in society.
However since most artist pay for the canvas that we use. Be it paper for drawing or painting, old saws, or even a traditional piece of canvas. Without the permission of the owner of the building, train car, truck, or any thing else the graffiti artist uses. Then that person is a vandal. What would you think of someone who went up to your car, or house and started painting on it?... Belive it or not, I am willing to bet you would probably be as pissed off as the owner of the building you were tagging... Would it be OK, for him to paint your house and car?... With what he felt was art? Any expression on to any form of canvas can be considered art... But if you don't pay for the canvas, or are commissioned to work there they you are trespassing and vandalizing other peoples property.
I think the people should give they a place to work on their art then they wouldn’t be breaking the law. We should tolerate graffiti on old abandoned buildings. After all, they can’t look any worse than they do. But it’s wrong to paint graffiti on the walls of buildings where people live or work.

no i jak to wyszło?