Legenda o Białej Damie-sprawdzenie

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Teofila of Działyński Szołdrska-Potulicka, owner of the Kórnik castle in the second half of eighteenth century, was a well-educated and extraordinary person. She rebuilt the castle, giving it the characteristics of Baroque and founded the French Park. Probably the legend of the White Lady took the beginning of the Teofilas evening walks. She suffered from migraine and she spend willingly time in the park to ease her ailments. A portret of Teofilahangs in this castle in the dining room. The legend says, taht she supposedly descents from the portrait at the night. Teofila maintains a light white robe and goes to the park, where the rider on the black horse waits for her. They wander together in the lanes and disappear from the first cockcrow. Evil forces put a curse on Teofila. She will be wandering around in the park to the time, when an old treasure will have found.
Nikt nie pomoże? :(
Teofila 'of' (tak nie mowimy po ang. to jest za bardzo zpolszczone...lepiej...from the house of) Działyński Szołdrska-Potulicka, owner of the Kórnik castle in the second half of eighteenth century, was a well-educated and AN extraordinary person.
Probably the legend of the White Lady took 'the beginning of the Teofilas' (tego nie rozumiem, o co tutaj chodzi) evening walks. She suffered from migraine and she 'spend willingly' (zla kol slow) time in the park to ease her 'ailments' (ale migrane to tylko jeden ailment). A 'portret' (popraw) of Teofila hangs in this castle in the dining room. The legend 'says' (napisz to inaczej...has it), 'taht' (ortog) she supposedly 'descents' (ortog) from the portrait at 'the' (niepotr) (naucz sie o tych przyimkach) night. Teofila 'maintains' (zle slowo) a light white robe and goes to the park, where 'the' A rider on 'the' A black horse waits for her.
They wander together in the lanes and disappear 'from' (zle slowo) the first
cockcrow.
She will be wandering around in the park to the time, when an old treasure will have BEEN found.
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