sprawdzenie-10 zdań

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The secret services can listen to everything we say. It is pissible, because they have many new technologicks. Probably they put a tap on the corporations, on the offices. It is likely, that they want to spy some importaint persons to know strictly confidential informations. It is a good possibility to investigate a murder or any other crime. It is definitly against the low, but it helps by search a criminal. But it is impossible to listen all conversations. Sometimes people write an importaint informations and then it is certain, that nobody can intercept the message. The tap give any hundred percent possibility to spy people. The secret services could install cameras too, to have absolute certainty what people do and say.
It is 'pissible' (ortog), because they have many new 'technologicks' (ortog). Probably they put a tap on the 'orporations, on the offices' (zla kol slow...in the offices of a large corporations) OF some 'importaint' (ortog) persons to know strictly confidential 'informations' (pomysl o tym slowie). 'It' THIS is a good possibility to investigate a murder or any other crime. It is 'definitly' (ortog) against the 'low' (zle slowo), but it helps by 'search' (zle slowo) a criminal. But it is impossible to listen (tu cos brakuje) all conversations. Sometimes people write 'an' (niepotr) 'importaint' (ortog) 'informations' (to slowo w l. poj) and then it is certain, that nobody can intercept the message. The tap giveS 'any' (nie rozumiem tego) (tu cos brakuje)hundred percent possibility to spy (tu cos brakuej) people. The secret services could install cameras too, to have absolute certainty (tu cos brakuje) what people do and say.
Dziękuję bardzo :* :)